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Ashfur's Better Life

Author: Jayfall
Status: Unfinished
Series: None
Allegiances: Thunderclan
Preceding: None
Succeeding: None
Spellcheckers: What??
What if Ashfur didn't die? After the fire when he went to the river, what if Hollyleaf didn't kill him? Well read on if you want to hear this story.

Chapter 1[]

Ashfur paced along the lake bed. The wet sand left pawprints behind him. All he wanted to do was forget about what happened the other night, forget about what he had done to Squirrelflight's kits- wait, correction- Leafpool's kits. Hollyleaf's words at the gathering still rang in his ears: "We are not cats of Thunderclan!," Ashfur recalled the events last night after the gathering, Hollyleaf had tried to kill him but he had escaped in the nick of time.

Ashfur shook his head, there was no use thinking over this stuff in his mind, he had to get rid of it. He needed to apologize to Squirrelflight, but would she accept his apology? Firestar probably banished him from Thunderclan already.

With a yowl of frustration Ashfur dunked himself under the lakes cooling waters. His attempt at suicide didn't last long before he came up, sputtering for breath.

What good is this? he thought as he shook off his pelt, I can't even kill myself!

He slid out from the lake and shook himself off once more. He continued his way along the bank. He thought about how Hollyleaf have tried to kill him. Hollyleaf had jumped out of nowhere and almost cut his throat open. He knew he shouldn’t have revealed the truth anyway all it had done was make matters worse but then he realized if StarClan is possible why wouldn’t they not punish him? Ashfur sighed and continued along the lake when a voice came out of nowhere and made him jump.

Mousefur’s voice yelled, “Ashfur, can you collect some catmint for Briarpaw please?” Ashfur sighed and answered back, “Sure.” He began walked over to the Twolegplace and began thinking. Mousefur, seriously asking me to do this like a apprentice? I thought she could do it herself. Ashfur made it to the Twolegplace and began collecting catmint and then circled back to Mousefur. “Here is your catmint,” Ashfur harshly said as he shoved it into Mousefur’s paws and walked away. Ashfur happened to walk right into Squirrelflight and knocked her out of the way. He didn’t feel like showing some mercy today.

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