Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

Silverheart and Firepelt (Ma)
This is Silverheart and Firepelt from the Emberclan series. Silverheart is a beautiful Silver she-cat with stunning blue eyes and Firepelt is a handsome flame colored tom with emerald green eyes. Should a make Silverheart a tabby? Just asking, lol Hazeleye 02:23, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

If Silverheart is a tabby, then yes. Fill in Firepelt's nose pink, and maybe fix the white spots.  ★Starshine★   "I shouldn't be here..." "But you are... "I know..."  04:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Twilightheart200

I kind of imagined her as a silver tabby but never drew the tabby stripes... I'll fix that right away. Hazeleye 11:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye Aren't they so cute together?

They're very cute! Make Firepelt a bit darker, and darken his tongue and nose pink. Also, you've gone over/ smudged the lineart on Silverheart's tail. I think she should stay a tabby- they make good mates! :)

Lion &lt;span style="color: "She's got a great mane of hair!" <span style="color: 21:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, just a question how do you unsmudge lineart? Hazeleye 18:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye with a feather in her hair XD

I'd say take the Sharpen tool and try that. I've never had to do it before. xD 07:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

LOL way to make me feel stupid! Jk, love ya Cloud! Hazeleye 21:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Reuploaded: I fixed Firepelt's color and the sharpen tool worked thanks Cloud you're awesome! Hazeleye 21:42, September 7, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

It's still a tad blurred, but, I'm not bothered by it. Also, Firepelt looks much better since you changed the colour. 07:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! was worried you might not like the color! Hazeleye 02:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

This does look really good now! No criticism! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Maybe blur the tabby stripes a bit more. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:35, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Just so you know, if you're having problems with that damn white that shows up, I use layers, save it, and then close and do the tabby stripes. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 23:47, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lookin' good. :) I hardly ever use the sharpen tool, but you clicked just the right amount of times.  The Tides of Change 22:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this? 13:19, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'd suggest making Silverheart's nose pink, and make Firepelt's nose a tad lighter. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:32, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the nose pink Hazeleye 14:54, October 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Blur the stripes a little more. 14:57, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerkit (K)
This is Tigerkit, the protagonist of Frosty Shadows. I willbe putting up the main characters over the next week, this being the first. Comments? Tigerfrost 23:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes have lighter outlines around them. Blur the stripes.

Lion &lt;span style="color: "She's got a great mane of hair!"  ★Starshine★   "I shouldn't be here..." "But you are... "I know..."  19:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I really don't care how it's done, but, please, fix the outline. xD 07:30, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

What I would try, (and have done in practice) is start out with the blank, and click Layer > Color to Alpha > and then ok, then fill the background in white. Color the picture in underneath. That's what I do, just a suggestion. :P 22:25, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I used Photoshop for this, so ur idea doesn't help. And, there is nosepink, it's just blurred a bit. andddd, the stripes are supposed to have the lighter colors on them. But I don't know what's wrong with the outline... Tigerfrost 16:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, add a layer under this image and color it in: (It is transparent)



Just trying to help. 19:38, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Try using Pixlr or Gimp for charart. They're much easier to use, and they're free.

&lt;span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid # The Tides of Change 01:46, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, no. I can't use Gimp or Pixlr if my life depends on it. however, i understand the transparency issue. i'll fix this by tomorrow. Also, thx Twilight ;) Tigerfrost 15:38, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. You have four days. 18:31, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hasn't been worked on in more then four days. Tagged for abandon. 13:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Eagleheart x Willowfeather (M)
You know, I really like this one, but one thing I can say...I hate tortoiseshells XP and technically she isn't one she just has a few tortoiseshell patches. She has a page so you can check her if you want. Alrighty then, comments? 15:09, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Loudsplash, but this will be declined. You must follow the 20 rule, meaning only 20 chararts on the page at once, or Skye will get annoyed. And next time, make the picture a thunbnail, full size is too big. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  16:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch that. I thumbed it. Obviously some of the CBA's have been approved. Blur the shading on the blue cat. And I would suggest making him a more grey blue than solid blue. It looks quite unnatural. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, reuploaded. I didn't make her blue-gray because he's suppost to be blue act, believe it or not. :P Anyway, I blurred it as much as I could... 12:36, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? And, Loudsplash, do you want me to make you a siggie? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:40, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Should this be approved? ~Mooneh

Blur and smudge A LOT at the blue one's shading. 13:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred it as much as I can. 11:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Mooneh, If you don't mind, I blurred it for you: :) 23:26, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

The Blue One (Eagleheart?)'s tounge looks Neon...Try a lighter tone of pink... 02:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Other than that, I can say no more. 14:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, meh :| 12:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Vixenpaw (MCA)
I have to say, I really like this! 16:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the size..it was a little big. Fill in the white spots in the ear...and just maybe lighten up the nosepink. 21:13, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Agree with Twilight. The nose pink needs lightening, and the shading, especially on the back and front left leg, needs blurring quite a bit. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:19, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe. Neon nose pink. xD Fix what the others suggested, since I can't find anything else. =P 18:34, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! I agree on the nose pink. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:37, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED oh man I love little Vixenpaw, she's so cuteeee!!! (Loudsplash)

Very nice. Comments? 13:22, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Something about the muzzle is annoying me. Either lighten it a bit or blur it quite a bit, then blur all the shading, especially on the back and front leg. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:34, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The shading bothers me a bit. It's a little dark, compared to the highlights... 19:48, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading stands out a bit too much, in my opinion. Maybe lighten it up? Grace glow Believe 18:35, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I agree with Leopard. The muzzle is quite dark. 22:26, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposted to be dark and i've blurred it as much as pixlr will let me. 11:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have reuploaded it, I've helped Splasheh with the shading. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  10:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I can see a difference. Ghost glow BOO! 14:25, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back is still bothering me. Instead of one distinct line of highlight their are several other, darker highlights and then a really pointy, bright, unnatural one in the middle. I think this may need to be restarted, but that's just me.  Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:17, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

That's it, i'm declining this. I'm sick of working on it and I have better chararts to work on. :| Sry. If anyone wants to take over they can but I won't be. 17:36, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sandyshore (W)
Sandyshore when he was still in PebbleClan. Comments? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and smudge smudge smudge. He looks patched. NICE JOB. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed... hehe... Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  23:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice Silver. On the belly by the back leg, I'd smudge the white and yellow together like the rest of the belly. It kinda stands out. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay :) 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. And dull them. :3 Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms...  01:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

How do I do that? 14:55, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I could help you if you want. 15:34, October 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Creekpaw (A)
Creekpaw. Comments? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading is a little too thick. Either shrink it a bit or blur it a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:38, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Take the stripe out from underneath the eye. It makes Creekpaw look like an elder. XDDD And darken the highlights just a tad.

 The Tides of Change 21:39, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed her.... I guess... Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  23:15, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I would blur and smudge more. 13:22, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Agree with Night. Also, darken the nose a tad. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:41, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. Blur and smudge more. Also, does the eye colour look really dark to anyone else? Grace glow Believe 19:19, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you're right, Glow. Silver, either add highlights to the eye or lighten it a little.  Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:14, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

They're supposed to be that color, Milleh. 01:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lizardclaw (W)
Ew. If anyone wants to take a shot at the shading for me go ahead. *shrugs* I don't mind either way. I CAN'T GET THEM RIGHT. Okay, enter Lizardclaw. WindClan she-cat, light brown tabby, with yellow eyes. Comments? Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look quite good Night. They aren't bad. Darken the nose pink a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with Claweh. Maube blur the stripes a tad, they kinda stand out. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  19:53, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I meant shading, sorry. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 20:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 11:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

*cough cough* lol. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 23:24, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm take her off so that other users can add theirs... we're at the 20 limit, damn. 13:23, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

No comments, looking good! Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:44, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Meep. 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is awsome. END OF STORY!!! CBA (don't even try to condridict me Nighteh! It's awsome!!) 00:01, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Shadowpatch (MC)
I know you've hardly heard of her, but she'll be important when I get to RainClan's story and a bit in LeafClan-Lies of Life. A bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did you shade this? 'cause if ya did, blur it a bit more please. =P You're PCA, so you should know better. (jk, just pickin.) 07:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

On her haunch, the top looks darker then the bottom. If it's shading, I would blur and smudge it more. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 12:03, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shading fail sorted. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's amazing! CBA? 01:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Len/Minnowsplash (W)
Here is my new character Len! She joins Splashclan and earns her warrior name there. Looke forward to the story! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 00:20, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white meets the gray and darken the nose pink ^-^ Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  00:31, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

kk i obviously forgot the nose pink and i DID blurr a lot! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 00:47, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

More. It needs a lot more blurring. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 12:02, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this Raven? 13:09, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, then maybe try to smudge a little bit where the gray and white meet? I find it looks really nice. Just turn the smudge tool to Fuzzy size 9 and smudge a tiny bit, if you want. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 13:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''i will edit it but i was grounded and i busy with school! sorry! guess what! i got a giant iMAC! Kiba ''' The search for Paradise... 23:05, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'd blur and smudge for you of you'd like, Flighteh. I can see you're busy with homework and stuff so I won't ming. 00:21, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

that wou;d be nice! thanx for the help! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 

I moved to a new computer, so I'll have to start over. I'll post it up maybe tomorrow. 01:24, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I did it! I hope you like it Flighteh! 14:41, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

thanks! i like it Kiba ''' The search for Paradise...

Foxpelt (MC)


&nbsp Alrighty here's Foxpelt! She's teh MC in Willowfeather and the Hawk. She mentors Vixenpaw, later Vixenshine. She's glowing because she's involved in a prophecy and the glow is a force field so that she can't be attacked. She's so epic XD ~Mooneh (Loudsplash)

What's up with the aura around it? Delete all of that first. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:33, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Did you read the info? It explains why. She's suppost to have it. She's suppost to glow. 12:03, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

At least blur it to make it more natural. 02:57, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

... I'm pretty sure the explanation wasn't there when I saw it. 13:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten the nose/paw. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED i had no clue how to get it up :| 16:28, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the paw/nose pink. Also, I fixed your siggie... The 's' in sig needed to be capitalized. 19:46, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is cute! Darken the nose pink just a teensy weensy bit. 21:57, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mkz and thankies. And REUPLOADED 11:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Good! CBA? 00:19, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved~ 14:53, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Silversnow (Q+K)
Silversnow from Stupid Little Things Called Toms She is a beautiful white she-cat with silver markings. Her kits are Whitekit (dark blue white hind leg), Falconkit (brown tabby, blue eyes like his father), Willowkit (light gray green eyes), and Blossomkit (cream, ginger paws) Comments? Hazeleye 19:34, September 27, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Blur and smudge Silversnow's stripes. Change Whitekit's pelt a bit. It looks greenish to me. Try this color. The hex code is #545569. (Thanks, Cloudeh XD) 23:11, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I did blur and smudge Silversnow's markings. She isn't a tabby so they aren't stripes as much as they are swirls. And I'll change Whitekit's color.Hazeleye 14:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Reuploaded: Fixed it are you sure it isn't a little too blue? PS what do you think of the other kits? Hazeleye 14:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Make Silversnow's paw pink. Or pink grey. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  15:12, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Fixed it Leopardclaw! Thanks! Hazeleye 17:24, October 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye loves SilverXHawk

Blur and smudgesmudgesmudge all the markings (Whitekit's leg, Blossomkit's paws, Silversnow's tabby swirls,etc) >:)  The Tides of Change 07:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred and smudged everything. Better?Hazeleye 20:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Lookin' good, Hazel.  Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:06, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs (Child)
Rainlegs wanted me to help her put this up. Comments? -- 04:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! 23:15, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Child? The Tides of Change 21:21, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. It's supposed to be like this. It's for the story. 01:34, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok.<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 07:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments, approve, or abandon?

Darken the nose pink a tad and it'll be on it's way to a CBA ^-^ 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 00:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:53, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Eagle (Lo)
I failed the missing eye. XD <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 07:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

No you didn't! Just blur it a bit more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Really? You don't think so? Ok. I'll blur it. :) <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 19:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded #6D7B8D; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #6D7B8D;"&gt; For two years the wind blows... 07:06, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good to me! Grace glow  Believe |undefined 18:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Glow.

Blur the eye a lttle more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  10:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. 19:41, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Yep. Same here. Grace glow  Believe |undefined 19:49, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Leopard and Glow, but I've blurred every single pixel on that eye as much as I can.

Hmm. Maybe it doesn't need much blurring. Doesn't seem important, really. Ghost glow BOO! 14:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I see you've worked really hard. CBA? 00:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:43, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... Silver? You actually have to move it.

Star (Lo)
Well this is Star. Not sure I like her, but hey ^_^ Fix the photo if you can, I don't think I uploaded it right. Grace glow Believe 19:39, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's very cute! Darken the nose pink nad blur and smudge the paws. 19:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hmm. Even I agree the nose pink was too light. Grace glow Believe 20:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Whyyy did it get so biggg? O.O Grace  glow Believe 20:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps you uploaded it full sized instead of thumbnail. Dunno, really. But it's gorgeous. It may just be my awful eyes, but I think I'm seeing blurred lineart on the head, ears, and right hind paw. :3 Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms...  01:05, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Nope. I didn't blur anything, just blurred my eyesight checking XD Ghost  glow BOO! 19:09, October 12, 2011

(UTC)

I told you my eyesight was bad. Sorry, Graceglow. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 19:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Amazing, really. The highlights look perfect, you added the right amount and everything. CBA? <font color=Black face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #153E7E;">F <font color=Orange face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color=Black face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color=Orange face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color=Black face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Scared yet? 23:46, October 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Wilowdawn (Q+K)
Willowdawn! I <3 her! Kits are (From the left to right) Wildkit, Squirrelkit and Dawnkit. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is adorable! Darken Willowdawn's nose a teensy bit. Lighten her pads a bit, too. 19:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  07:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Are Dawnkit's paws meant to look pinkish? It doesn't look very natural. Grace glow Believe 09:14, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  17:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelkit's stripes look a bit green. Willowdawn's pads should be an old rosey sort of colour. And Dawnkit's paws still look pink... Are they meant to be cream? <span style="color:#6D7B8D; background:#98AFC7; border:1px solid #6D7B8D; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #6D7B8D;"&gt; For two years the wind blows... 05:44, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The paws are my idea of cream, but I made em a little more brown white that pink white. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   16:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but the stripes look like marsh colour. Ghost glow BOO! 18:49, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cream is brownish white sometimes, and sometimes it's pinkish white. It depends on what you want it to be. I still think you should fix Squirrelkit's stripes.<span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 05:28, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded I changed Dawnkit's paws back to pink-cream, I prefer it like that. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   15:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Grassleap (W)
I think she's quite cute. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  19:49, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The legs look weird. Are they meant to have no stripes? Grace glow Believe 20:11, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The back legs? Dunno. I don't think so. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add at least one stripe to the back legs. They kinda look wierd having no stripes while the rest of the body does. Otherwise it's perrrrfect. XD 00:05, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   16:28, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Ghost glow BOO! 18:53, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

OMIGAWSH THIS IS GAWJUS! :D <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Love the colors. ;) But the stripes on the body look messy and randomised, can you smooth them out and make then less scribbly? Other than that, it's beautiful. <font color=Black face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #153E7E;">F <font color=Orange face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color=Black face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color=Orange face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color=Black face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Scared yet? 23:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

'Reuploaded I smoothe a few out a bit, but I kinda like the random. If you think THEY'RE random, wait until ya see Randompaw. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   15:37, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Windfur (D)
I've probably failed this upload. (You haven't. Love Leopard) I PROMISE he will become a major character. He will be very major! Grace glow Believe 20:05, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

He looks good! BLURRRR. The stripes. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:10, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Personally, I can't see a difference >.< Grace  glow Believe 20:22, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'd make the point of the stripes a little longer, and a little sharper. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now the haunch one's bugging me >.> Grace  glow Believe 20:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Better! Now, maybe add another stripe in between the tail and the last stripe on the back. I think that would even them out a little. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  07:41, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Grace glow Believe 09:10, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the paws a little. <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:21, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! Ghost glow BOO! 20:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)'''

Moon (Lo)
Here she is. Moon is a dark gray tabby with blue eyes...Comments? (I failed shading/highlights :3) 20:34, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

OMSC, Twilight, this is AMAZING! Lighten the nose. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darn it. I'm trying to think of something to critique, but I can only fall back on 'Lighten the nose'. Good job! Grace glow Believe 20:42, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks, you guys... :) 21:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks amazing! I can't find any flaws! CBA? 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nooooo comments! Now it's just PERFECT. Ghost glow BOO! 19:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

*Jaw drops*. Gawjus. ^^ <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:05, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 14:42, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Bluefrost (W)
Phew. *wipes brow* I got the 20th one. Damn. Bluefrost, warrior of ThunderClan. 20:42, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Something about the highlights are bugging me but it's hard to describe what it is >.< Grace  glow Believe 20:46, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think, Gloweh, they are a little small. Night, when you do highlights, make the brush about the size of the head. That makes good looking highlights. And the add some highlight to the face. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  07:39, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, but how the hell do I do that?

First, paint over the highlights you have. Then make a bigger brush and highlight again. Ghost glow BOO! 14:35, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing, Nighteh! Nuff said. But I do agree with Gloweh and Claweh (XD I'm noticing a lot of users copying my -eh thing! It's okay, I don't mind! I love it, actually!) 00:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :) Copying what? 12:14, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, can I do that with layers? 12:14, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Probably. If you paint with a brush over the highlights in whatever layer, if you are using layers. Then make the dodge tool roughly the size of the head and add the highlights. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   16:05, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Decline it. I don't have time to work on it. 22:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkstar


a picture of Hawkstar, the witty leader of fireclan.

Warmheart 10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, you've went over the 20 limit. This will probably be declined.

she's right. but this is good. i like it. but btw you have to have a plain white backgroud Kiba  The search for Paradise...  11:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Over the 20 limit. This will probably be declined......plus, the background is coloured. Grace glow Believe 12:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is excellent, but it will be declined, due to two reasons. One, you are over the twenty limit, meaning that there can only be twenty images for approval at once; two, you are not allowed a coloured background, so you should make it plain white. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  18:15, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

i changed the background, but i dont think i can do anything about the 20 limit. Warmheart 03:49, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually this should be fine because there are I think 7 images that need archived and the leads are kinda inactive so I think it can stay up. I know i'm posting my 2 while I have teh chance. 13:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I see your poimt Splasheh. This can probably stay then. I can not find any crticisms at all. Well done! Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  17:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but none of the images have been moved, have they?

This is amazing!! It's the 20th image, so it's okay. The two below however are over the limit. 00:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

i appreciate all the complements, and im glad its not over the 20 limit too. Warmheart 04:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Close call there. XD You've smudged this too much, though. Everything has a weird, blue outline. Make the dots above the eyes a little lighter. &lt;span style="color:#6D7B8D; background:#98AFC7; border:1px solid For two years the wind blows... 05:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

ok, i erased the blue arua, and lightened the dots but im not sure if i can fix the smudge problem. Warmheart 11:37, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok. It's just that it smudges into some of the lineart. This is amazing. No comments from me. :) <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 18:14, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Patch (MC)
i know this is over the limit but i saw that some images were getting approved and thought it would be okay to post it. if not just tell me and i'll take it off. oh and i noticed the background colour isn't exactly white i'll try to fix that as soon as i can Kiba  The search for Paradise...  19:59, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Raven, but you don't know if they're going to get approved in the next day or so. This really shouldn't be here. It's encouraging others to say "oh it's alright" and next thing we know, we're ten over the limit. But it's not my project - so staff can decide. 22:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfern. Raven, if there is a sign saying THERE IS TO BE NO MORE THAN 20 IMAGES POSTED ON THIS PAGE, then that means there is no more than 20 allowed. There aren't any buts about it.