Talk:Brambleclaw Speaks/@comment-20437158-20190423194656


 * clapping* Beautiful! I love it! So well written!

I do wish you kind of mentioned more of Brambleclaw's hurt over Squirrelflight not trusting him enough to tell him. Because he wasn't upset with her because the Three weren't their kits, he was upset with Squirrelflight because she didn't trust him enough to tell him the truth.