Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

Hazeleye (MCA)
She is a long-haired ginger calico she-cat with unique hazel eyes and a long, bushy tail. This is my first charart so I hope you like it!

This is good, but did you click on the picture on the project's home page then copy and paste it into your photo library (or picasa)? You shouldn't use black to make the markings; use a very dark gray. The leaf should be green (unless it's like autmn). Then you just have to blur and smudge. Fill in the nose, too. Kuroshitsuji undefined  18:01, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Thanks for the advice! (and it is autumn... My favorite season!)Hazeleye 12:50, July 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Is it better? I smudged and blurred aplenty.Hazeleye 12:50, July 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Excuse me Hazeleye, please sign with 4 ~ and then your username please. Also, can you change the tail back even if she if longhaired? Fea ther  Mew?  06:47, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Hazeleye 12:50, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches. The eye looks strange, fill it in. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 06:30, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

You don't smudge the lineart, silly goose :D Kuros 

hitsuji undefined  23:42, July 25, 2011(UTC)

The patches look too red and a bit too bright. Try making them darker- and yes, fix up that lineart!

- Millie-  200 edits!  05:54, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry my computer was being stupid and the smudging went in the wrong place :( Hazeleye 20:50, July 26, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I FIXED IT! Hazeleye 21:28, July 26, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I had a closer look and you've gone over the lineart a little when colouring/smudging the black tail and black front paw.

Millie-  200 edits!  08:14, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay i'll fix tht right away! Hazeleye 14:48, July 28, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye for the 80 millionth time lol

FIXED IT! YAY! Hazeleye 18:00, August 3, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye after a lot of edits :D

The patches are a bit too red and bright, and unnatural. Try paling it and blurring and smudging. I'd start over so I didn't mess it up. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:59, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the patches. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  15:52, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I noticed on the foreleg without a black patch your red patch went over the line ar

t a tiny bit. (I'm not trying to be a critic, I just want your charart to look good). :) It looks great! Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  01:11, August 9, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded: I fixed it again! Hazeleye 20:22, August 10, 2011 (UTC) Hazeleye I'm really getting tired of this

Hazeleye, be patient. We want you to have the best possible. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Change the color of the leaf to something a tad darker. Other then that, I think is is ready. 03:32, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

There is some blurred lineart on the bottom part of the haunch, right on the end. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:01, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded: I fixed it! Hazeleye 14:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye, Is it better THIS time?

Urgh, now I see smudged lineart on the haunch. Sorry, Hazel. It's right on the end of the haunch lineart. 17:06, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'm just gonna restart because I hate un-smudging the picture Hazeleye 18:58, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Reuploaded: Is it better I started over so the patches might look a little different :P Hazeleye 21:06, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye feels better about this one :)

Good for you, sicne this is your first charart, we should have let you pass a little easier. ^w^. CBA? F e at her Rollbacker 17:39, August 26, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ashkit (K)
This is another one of Ravenflight's kits... Ashkit! Ravenflight00 18:34, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Again, the highlights look a bit... strange. After you've fixed them up, blur them. Millie 400 edits! 20:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

How about this? I just deleted the high-lights completely. Hope it's fine! Ravenflight00 00:28, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great. Other than that, make the nose grey.

Millie 400 edits! 00:55, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

kk Millie! Ravenflight00 01:35, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose grey a bit darker. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  12:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 03:32, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

yes i am but i couldn't do it right now... busy... Kiba  The search for Paradise...  00:06, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I believe there is either blurred lineart or shading waste above the haunch. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

i'm not sure... Kiba  The search for Paradise...  19:06, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

kk reuploaded! i made the nose a darker grey and earased that... thing above the haunch! hope it's good for aproval! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 12:28, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thunderstrike (W)
He's meant to be dark blue-grey, like a storm cloud, and his eyes are golden like lightning. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  08:42, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, he came out a little too blue. He looks like someone drowned him in a bucket of navy paint. :D But it's beautiful! The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 14:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Who else is commenting on this? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

No one, I guess. Can you fix up the color? It's too blue, even for a dark blue-gray. xD 03:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded but I don't think the changes are showing yet. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:33, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Good, I like this. CBA? F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Why is his ear oddly shaped? Do you think you could fix that. Hazeleye 14:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

It's not 'oddly shaped'. It has a notch taken out of it. It's supposed to look like that. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:32, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry... It wasn't in the description. Hazeleye 21:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye Apoligizes

Feather (T)
Here's the main character in my new fan fic Tribe of Rushing Water~ Feather's Story! Ravenflight00 21:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! A tribe cat! Looks great, no comments here. F e  a  t  h  e  r  07:03, August 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Aww, sweet! Maybe darken the pink a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, great colors. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 14:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanx! Hey morning colour, are you nighty? Ravenflight00 12:13, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I am. :) Night  fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, and this should be ready. 03:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this? F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

yeah still workin... busy Kiba  The search for Paradise...  19:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded! Sorry it took awhile but i think this might be good!! Kiba ''' The search for Paradise... 12:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Willowfern (Q+ K)
You can see now that I don't put any of my chararts for approval without shading. This is Willowfern and her kits. *From left to right* Maplekit, Bluekit, Pebblekit, and Rowankit. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  17:57, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

How cute. I am guessing Bluekit gets his/her colors from his/her father? :D F  e  a  t  h  e  r  21:18, August 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It's a he and yes, he did get his pelt color from his father. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  01:47, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

CUTE. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:34, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

THANK YOU!! One more thing, Feathereh. Bluekit got Rippleclaw's pelt color, but Maplekit got his tabby genes. Rowenkit's pelt color came out of nowhere. If you care, Maplekit got her pelt color from Creekshade, Rippleclaw's sister. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  23:28, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd just darken all the noses and the paw a teeny bit. Other than that, it looks brilliant! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:51, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Better? And thanks, Claweh :D Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  03:38, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, much better. No more comments. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Exept, I would prefer you remove the stripes from the kit above the queens head where the eye should be, for, it just doesnt look right. F e a t h e r m o o n 05:50, August 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Better? I don't think the change is showing yet. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  22:25, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, CBA? F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Jayfeather (MC)
Ugly, this is my first charart on here. Er...comments? Icestorm 15:43, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is NOT ugly Icy! It looks wonderful! Add some stripes on the tail, and if you want, get rid of the earpink. We don't use earpink on here a lot. xD 15:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Omigod. THIS IS AMAZING!! I agre4e with Raineh, add some stripes to the tail. Otherwise, it's perfect :) Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  15:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This really is good for your first charart. I remember my first charart. It's embarrassing. This looks great! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

You've gone into the earpink with the face stripe. You can scrap the earpink and leave the stripe as it is, or you could shorten it.This is looking great! Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:52, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, who posted this? Very nice. The shading on the right front left is a little dark, mabye lighten it--and fill the noes in Dark gray as well as the paw pads. ^.^ F e a t h e r  m o o n 22:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Agree. But she needs to get rid of the earpink. Doesn't look good at all, and Midnite told us not to. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 22:30, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I re-did the shading and got rid of the earpink. 'Tis better? 12:52, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Now just add the paw/nose pink! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:11, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if your still on vacation or not, Icestorm. But just work on this as soon as you can, please. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Beautiful! Better than I could've done that's for sure! I would actually use this for one of my stories. Hazeleye 16:50, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye gives her seal of approval (I wish it actually mattered)

Smilestar (L)
Smilestar is a white she-cat with black specks. I know it's not the best, but I tried. Hazeleye 16:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

It's really good Hazeleye! Just lighten the nose a tiny bit, and mebbe darken the eyes a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I agree with Leopard. All I'm going to say is that you might want to smudge and blue the spots so they are at the same consistency. Some are bold, whereas others are very faint, smudged specks.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:55, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to smear the spots across the cat's body... they can be pretty much there with a little bit of smearing. A tiny bit of smearing. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   13:15, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Reuploaded: I started over and used a different thing for the specks and didn't blur or smudge. Is it better. Hazeleye 15:04, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye, May this charart go better than my last

Ivypatch (Q+K)
Well here we are! I made a new fan fic starring her and another cat. You can find the link here: Ivypatch~ My Wrong Choice! Here are her and heer kits Rdkit (Red-brown kit), Duskkit (grey kit), and Fogkit (white kit) Ravenflight00  19:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good! All I'd say is the nose/paw pink is a tiny bit neonish. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  20:03, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

KK i'll fix that right away! Re-uploaded Ravenflight00  20:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Duskkit needs nose pink, or if he has it, make it darker.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:45, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

he does have nose pink... but it's grey nose pink! Ravenflight00 20:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a little darker, then. XD

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 23:17, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

kk milleh... but i have to do it tommorow... my mother orders me to get off (ha ha ha) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  23:44, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be Declined. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

sorry sorry!!!! i will get around to it i am very busy!!!!!!! Please understand!! ~from ravenflight P.S. i am not loged in at the moment

I understand you're busy, but I'm still gonna comment. On the face, some of the gray is over the lineart. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''kk i'll try to fix that... can you tell me where the color goes over? Kiba ''' The search for Paradise... 19:04, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

kk i took out this photo for bit! i'll put it right back after i'm done doing stuff with it!! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 12:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

'''kk been fixed! i fixed dewkit cause i wanted her to look more like her mother. '''

 Kiba  The search for Paradise... 12:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Firestorm (K)
Here is my cat. From A New Destiny: Brave Queen. My first Charcat up for approval XD. Firestorm is supposed to be a bright ginger tom with dark green eyes, and a long scar running down his flank. Well, that's all. Please tell me what needs to be fixed :3 【Cárdinal】 ショウジョ 23:42, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the words at the bottom. His nose is smudged with dark paint. The highlights are in strange places, sort of like patches or stripes. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 04:02, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

You've blurred the lineart far too much on the whiskers and paws. The highlights are smudged with dark colour around the shoulder and ear. You've smudged the lineart there too. Also, make the nose pink darker.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 05:24, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Note: Please understand that Firestorm is a bright ginger tom. So he's suppose to be a lighter color than a ginger.

Hilights on the haunch and shoulder look unnatural. Darken them. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:25, August 13,2011 (UTC)

There's more dark smudging around the right eye. I'd blur all the highlights after you've darkened them, too.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose lighter and more pink. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the orange is odd. Try and nake it a more firey orange or a ginger. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

There's some shading that's out of the lineart above the haunch. And the shading and highlights could use some blurring. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Jaysong and Larkfoot
Comments? It is my first image. Bumblestripeluva100

This looks okay. For a start, you've got the tails mixed up. Colour Jaysong's tail the colour of Larksong's tail and vice versa. Fill in the nose pink on boh of them and fill in the white dots on the grey one (is that Jaysong?)'s nose. On their posteriors you've coloured the lineart, too. And the highlights and shading on Larkfoot (if that is the yellow one) look like big circles- blur them. Her paws are also far too yellow. I don't understand how you got the highlights and shading so nice on Jaysong and not as well on Larkfoot.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 06:09, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Mille. I'd redo the image, and start again, trying not to fill the lineart and trying to get an even highlight and shading. Or if you aren't too confident with shading, you don't have to do any at all. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

You've gone over a lot on the lineart. I agree as well. It might be best to re-do the image. But nice try. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:11, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Please work on this. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ya this has not been worked on a while. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:55, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Scarlet (K)
Scarlet's kittypet image. I didn't go over the lineart, so don't tell me I did, I checked a billion times. Comments? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:11, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Well, number one, fill the paw. The smudge/blur the stripes a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  15:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Agree. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 15:40, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:55, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Fixed paw and blurred. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 17:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge the left paw a bit more.

Millie 06:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Smudged. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 19:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

CBA? F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Cloudpaw (A)
I don't really want to say too much about this charart, so, comments? Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  15:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Cute. Is it my eyes or does the shading to the left of the haunch look strange? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 15:41, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I noticed that too, Nighty. Also, the shading on the haunch is really blotchy. Try blurring it. But cute. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:56, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded  Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  08:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good, CBA? F e a t h e r m o o n 00:46, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Leopardclaw and Cross-Scar (M)
Yes, I realise I forgot shading. I <3 them. Comments? Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  15:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't Leopard have more spots on her head? I dunno. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 15:42, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 16:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Leopardclaw, it doesn't matter that you forgot shading, you don't have to anyway. F e a t h e r m o o n 18:27, August 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I do want to add shading to it, and Night, she has three spots on her left cheek and will have a scar on her right. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lot more spots on Leopardclaw than I remembered... O.O Oh, and this is Millie. I can't be bothered to log in.

121.45.187.246 21:03, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  08:18, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, very nice-- I like the way the highlights look on Cross-scar. F e a t h e r m o o n 00:44, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ashblaze (K)
Ashkit, featured in the Broken Shadow fanfiction, and Broken serie.s

Fluffy and spiky furred black she-kit with Bright Aqua eyes.

Well heres my attempt of spiky edited fur, (took a few tried but I got it)--and a fur effect.

And she won't be Ashblaze until the second last book in the series, but yea. F e a t h e r m o o n 08:54, August 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

WOW! HOW DID YOU DO THAT? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 16:07, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Feather this is beautiful! How did you do that? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 19:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

...I'm speechless... :O

121.45.187.246 21:04, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hah,Thanks guys. Really, in the beggining, erased some lineart, replaced it with some spiky ur, and then did some stuff and created a longhair look. F e a t h e r m o o n 21:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Um, *Blink-blink* CBA? F e a t h e r m o o n 00:44, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This is AWESOME Feathermoon Hazeleye 21:04, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye is pleased by this drawing

Starshine- Prey-Hunter
She's the new cat in Rogue's Legacy and Warrior's Destiny... but how does Eagle know her? She's a beautiful silver she-cat with sparkling, deep blue eyes.

Millie 08:35, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! She's really pretty! Possiblt soften and lighten the tongue and nose, they look too bright against the grey. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  08:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded (and she was a cave-guard before... whoops!

Millie 23:03, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, *Double looks* beside the tounge are actually teeth, fill them in a very white yellow. Cat teeth arn't exacily white. F e a t h e r m o o n 00:45, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Reuploaded

Millie 03:41, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

making the two spots beside the tongue as teeth is very creative! i like it, before i read the comments i was going to say this: Colour in those two spots by the tongue. But scince they're teeth why bother? lol Kiba  The search for Paradise...  14:01, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Berrytail+Kits
Okay, so I probobly won't be putting charart for approval very often now, since the way I do them now takes so long. I have to make it transparent, and I have to go through pixlr and a buch of other thigns. and then I need tons and tons of layers, so overall one charart takes all day.

Anyway, here is Berrytail (Cream and brown tabby she-cat), Ashkit, (Fluffy, pure black she-cat), and Oak-kit (Handsome, deep red brown tom). Please, don't comment on Berrytail's cream, It is cream. F e a t h e r m o o n 05:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The background's grey... oh, and make Berrytail's nose purplish-pink.

Millie 05:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, the background isn't gray, It's transparent. And '''Reuploaded. ''' F e at her Rollbacker 05:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

WOWIE!!!! THIS.IS.AMAZING!!! Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  14:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, Feather! This is gawjus!!! Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Tankchu guize. F e at her Rollbacker 21:31, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Frostflower and kits
My first charart! Hope you like it 15:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

this is very nice! ~from ravenflight00

Lovely! Fill in the eyes and nose pink on the kits. Also, they look a bit too purple. Make them more grey.

Millie 22:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! On the tail and ears of the queen, you've blurred/smudged some lineart. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

They look purple cause they're blue-grey cats... maybe i made them a bit too blue... >w< XXWolf SongXx 19:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blue-grey is not that purple. Try looking at Silversong's dark blue-grey charart and get an example of what you're doing. The blue kit is a bit too blue. I'll post some examples of blue-grey shades on your talk page to help you out. :)

Millie 05:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Here, I coloured in the kittens' noses, and i made them less blue. i also fixed all the blurred lineart (hopefully all of it) Is this good?? What else needs fixing??

XXWolf SongXx 19:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

lookin good Kiba  The search for Paradise...  21:31, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! Sorry about the shades... my mum came back from Europe yesterday and I had no time to do it. XD

Millie 05:42, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderheart + Kits ~ For Approval
This is horrible. *wails* Cinderheart is a tabby, but I didn't want to add stripes because there was no room. I'll try again later. Any I will blur the shading later too. Other than that, comments? 10:42, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is fine, Rainey! Fill in the eye and nose pink for the yellow one and the cross-eyed looking one. Also, the yellow one is a little too... yellow. Make it more browny, or a gold colour, if that's what you call it. :)

Millie 05:41, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! I had no idea you announced the winners until I saw this for approval, and I didn't even know this was for approval. x3 And just do what Millie says and what you are planning on doing and it'll be ready I believe! F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 00:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-uploaded. 01:02, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedfeather
My third charart! This is Wolfpaw's mentor, Spottedfeather. And Spotterfeather is a tom cat, if you were wondering. (I was going to add some shadow... but i forgot..) anyways, hope you like it!

XXWolf SongXx 19:27, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

luv it wolfy but the lineart is sorta blurred.... and i think i see some white spots left on the ears and stuff double check that kk? this ravenflight btw and also you r not alowd to have the background any colour other than white Kiba  The search for Paradise...  19:50, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred lineart! 0.0 I did it on my first charart. I don't know how you would fix it, it's hard to fix... Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 22:31, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The patches have a strange, blurry, almost geen outline around them. Try redoing them and blurring around the very edge of the patch in a clockwise direction. Oh, and also just put the name of your cat as the title. No other information (like apprentices) is required. Put that on their character page. :)

Millie 05:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Shellstar
Second charart! Here's the leader of WaterClan, Shellstar. It's a she-cat. Hope you like it!!

XXWolf SongXx 19:30, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

lookin good... please look at the ears becauase there are some white spots... otherwise great!! and just so you know you are only allowd five chararts on hear at a time!! after you have to wait for one to get aproved to add another one. you should become a member of Project:Create!! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 19:52, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Good but...blur the shading a LOT. Just so you know, shading is optional. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 22:38, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Splash (loner)
this is splash the loner in my new fan fic Splash~ The Story of the Cursed hope you like it!! btw read mah fan fic in order to know about her troublesome life! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 19:57, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 19:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Thanx shadey!! Kiba ''' The search for Paradise... 22:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you use the loner blank please? <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 00:24, August 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

oh! yes that's right! i forgot that this blanck was for the med. cat! I just had it in my pics folder and wanted to use it! sorry! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 12:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, thats okay. We just don't usually use blanks not in our gallery--Unless it's a contest. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 14:15, August 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ripplesplash and Gingerheart
this is charart i decided to do hope you enjoy! (i don't know about you guys... but expect imediate approval! LoL!! This is one of my greastest chararts!) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  23:06, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Just one thing, on your orange and white cat, the orange patch on the foreleg, there's a tiny spot where it went over the lineart. :3 Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  13:50, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''kk thanx shadey! i'll work on fixing that! Kiba ''' The search for Paradise... 13:54, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Starshine (Q+K)


Okay! My first Charart. This is Starshine and her kits from Starshine's Secret. This Charart Includes: Starshine, Juniperkit, Blackkit, Dovekit, and Tinykit. Anyway, comments? I know that the torn ear looks terrible. I'll fix that later

Loverly! On the kit with the dark gray patches, some have gone over lineart. 03:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded; Fixed coloring over lineart (i think) and torn ear. Twilightheart

You've forgotten the paw/nose pink on the queen. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  09:11, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Added Paw/Nose Pink. Not Sure if changes are showing, yet (Aug. 25, 11:16 AM)

Make the black patches on the black and grey kit lighter so they stand out from the lineart.

Millie 21:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sophie (KP)
She's a kittypet who will be appearing in Strangers in the Shadows. She's based off a cat in real life. To be honest, she didn't turn out quite like I wanted, so I'm a bit disappointed. Comments? Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  09:10, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely Claweh! (Can I call you that)? I find nothing wrong with it! 12:51, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Sure you can! Silver does. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is a Snowshoe cat, am I correct? And looks good. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:34, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I don't know. She's a friend's cat. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  08:29, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Davy (KP)
I dunno why the background's coloured in. I'll fix it later. Davy will be seen along with Sophie. I have more to upload, but I'm at my limit, although the others have all been on CBA for a while... I'm babbling. Comments? Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  09:10, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

-_- didn't you read my comment on my charart? it's called Transparent. Oi. Try erasing the "colored background" if you don't believe me. -_- <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 03:03, August 26, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather, I actually did just colour in the background by accident when I filled in the white. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:42, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

But it's transparent at the moment. sorry i acted all weird on that last one, I was having a bad hour i suppose. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 08:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It's ok Feather, I can be grumpy too. 'Reuploaded with a normal background now. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  08:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Breezeheart (W)
Uh, this is Breezeheart and he appears in Starshine's Secret. Not a huge fan of this charart. Uh...Anyways, Comments?

16:19, August 25, 2011