Talk:Life In The Clan/@comment-3155630-20110413184733

Ooh! I love commenting on stories, and fixing them. I did it since October. :) Okay, first, let's start with spelling. Ice, spell check and capitalize names. Make sure to put a period/question/exclamation after a a quotation. Also, make Mossfur's death... a tad more horrible. It's kind of like me being stabbed and then I say, "No. I'm not okay, and I will die". Well duh I'm not okay! I'm freaking gushing blood!