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Newleaf of DawnClan
This is one of my absolute favourites. Silver or Millie to critique please; honestly, it's easier than you think, just base the layout and what you say off one of my old ones. 08:26, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Right, I'm giving this up as a free-for-all. Anyone who wants it, take it, unless Silver or Millie want to do it. Just base it off an old one, and it'll be fine =P 21:17, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do it. This will be nothing compared to yours, Leopard, but I'm improving.

The plot receives a 9 It was great, but the beginning was the tiniest bit slow. I really enjoyed it though, very well-wrtitten. It flowed nicely too. I especially loved the gripping end of Chapter 3.

'''The characters receive a 9.5. '''I could see that Goldenheart was wise, Dawnstar was quite nervous at times and cared a lot about her Clan and Firesky. But I feel that at some times they were a little...flat.

'''The grammar receives a 9. '''I saw very few mistakes, just a few spelling errors and other little things. Not much there.

Overall, it was a great story. I really enjoyed it, and I admire your skills, Leopard. I know this wasn't good, but I am in a hurry. 00:21, March 20, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

DeadClans: Series 1 Book 1
This was my first story I finished on this site. Anyone who wants to critique it can.

Watersong  &amp;   Spiderblaze  Tails  Entwined  in  Love  18:37, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Am I allowed to dritique? If so, I'll do it. Rowan fall  All trees fall sometimes  08:37, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, Rowan, you are allowed. Go for it. 19:10, March 23, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Spikyfur and Ladybug
soo.... is it good so far? Anyone can critique it. Rowan fall  All trees fall sometimes  21:08, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

If no one is up for it I would love to! I will try to get it to you by Sunday, fair? Littlewillow LAUGH LAUGH LAUGH 00:33, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Bravery and Sacrifice: Series 1 Book 1
Anyone can do this one.

Watersong  &amp;   Spiderblaze  Tails  Entwined  in  Love  13:52, March 24, 2012 (UTC)