Talk:Burning Embers/Allegiances/@comment-67.53.251.106-20170902113145

I get this is supposed to be a fan story.. But things are a little too off for me. Such as Millie still being a warrior, even though she went to the Elders den with Graystripe. Snowbird being deputy, even though at the time of Graystripe becoming an Elder, I'm pretty sure she's died. Etc. etc.

Sorry to be a bother, but to make it less confusing for readings, you should adjust that :D!