Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

Hazeleye (MCA)
She is a long-haired ginger calico she-cat with unique hazel eyes and a long, bushy tail. This is my first charart so I hope you like it!

This is good, but did you click on the picture on the project's home page then copy and paste it into your photo library (or picasa)? You shouldn't use black to make the markings; use a very dark gray. The leaf should be green (unless it's like autmn). Then you just have to blur and smudge. Fill in the nose, too. Kuroshitsuji undefined  18:01, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Thanks for the advice! (and it is autumn... My favorite season!)Hazeleye 12:50, July 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Is it better? I smudged and blurred aplenty.Hazeleye 12:50, July 25, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Excuse me Hazeleye, please sign with 4 ~ and then your username please. Also, can you change the tail back even if she if longhaired? Fea ther  Mew?  06:47, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Hazeleye 12:50, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches. The eye looks strange, fill it in. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 06:30, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

You don't smudge the lineart, silly goose :D Kuros 

hitsuji undefined  23:42, July 25, 2011(UTC)

The patches look too red and a bit too bright. Try making them darker- and yes, fix up that lineart!

- Millie-  200 edits!  05:54, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry my computer was being stupid and the smudging went in the wrong place :( Hazeleye 20:50, July 26, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I FIXED IT! Hazeleye 21:28, July 26, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I had a closer look and you've gone over the lineart a little when colouring/smudging the black tail and black front paw.

Millie-  200 edits!  08:14, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay i'll fix tht right away! Hazeleye 14:48, July 28, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye for the 80 millionth time lol

FIXED IT! YAY! Hazeleye 18:00, August 3, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye after a lot of edits :D

The patches are a bit too red and bright, and unnatural. Try paling it and blurring and smudging. I'd start over so I didn't mess it up. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:59, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the patches. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  15:52, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I noticed on the foreleg without a black patch your red patch went over the line ar

t a tiny bit. (I'm not trying to be a critic, I just want your charart to look good). :) It looks great! Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  01:11, August 9, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded: I fixed it again! Hazeleye 20:22, August 10, 2011 (UTC) Hazeleye I'm really getting tired of this

Hazeleye, be patient. We want you to have the best possible. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Change the color of the leaf to something a tad darker. Other then that, I think is is ready. 03:32, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ashkit (K)
This is another one of Ravenflight's kits... Ashkit! Ravenflight00 18:34, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Again, the highlights look a bit... strange. After you've fixed them up, blur them. Millie 400 edits! 20:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

How about this? I just deleted the high-lights completely. Hope it's fine! Ravenflight00 00:28, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great. Other than that, make the nose grey.

Millie 400 edits! 00:55, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

kk Millie! Ravenflight00 01:35, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose grey a bit darker. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  12:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 03:32, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Bearclaw (W)


This is a re-make, since Bearclaw need a *cough* update. I used highlights for the first time on the haunch and shoulder... ugh. Night fern Over 4600 Edits, Suckers! 18:48, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose a tad darker.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 22:27, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are too lig

ht. Darken em, before I kick your butt. XDD 00:09, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Night, when I do highlights, I like to make the brush so it is as big as the haunch. Blur the highlights quite a bit. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  12:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Um, how do I darken the highlights? o.0. Night fern Over 4600 Edits, Suckers! 18:24, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've taken the burn tool and just gone over that area. It makes it darker, and it looks neat. You want me to fix it for you? 01:04, August 9

, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll give you the credit. I'll make another one later by myself. Thanks Kels. :) The Mourning  Color RIP, my dear Flashy 01:32, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's still YOUR charart. I'm just fixing it up a tad. >.> 01:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I added some shading to try and make the highlights a little less noticeable...but I don't think it worked. 02:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose a darker pink. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  06:40, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for the nose pink. I'm going to try the dodge... o.O Someone help me. xD. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 19:27, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded for the haunch and shoulder... ew... The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 19:31, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I made the highlights a tad darker for ya, Nighteh :) Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  19:37, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :) The Mourning  Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:35, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

You are totally welcome :D Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  15:41, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

MOON? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 03:33, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thunderstrike (W)
He's meant to be dark blue-grey, like a storm cloud, and his eyes are golden like lightning. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  08:42, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, he came out a little too blue. He looks like someone drowned him in a bucket of navy paint. :D But it's beautiful! The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 14:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Who else is commenting on this? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

No one, I guess. Can you fix up the color? It's too blue, even for a dark blue-gray. xD 03:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feather (T)


Here's the main character in my new fan fic Tribe of Rushing Water~ Feather's Story! Ravenflight00 21:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! A tribe cat! Looks great, no comments here. F e  a  t  h  e  r  07:03, August 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Aww, sweet! Maybe darken the pink a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, great colors. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 14:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanx! Hey morning colour, are you nighty? Ravenflight00 12:13, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I am. :) Night  fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, and this should be ready. 03:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Snow and Running (M)


Awww! <3

Well, this is Snowdawn and Runningcloud from Cloudskye and I's FrostClan.

They arn't mates Behind The Shadows, you can realize that this shipping will come in very soon!

F e  a  t  h  e  r  07:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Aww! Very nice Feather, no comments. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:03, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

None from me. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:34, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! 08:26, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. I'll approve it once the 24 hours are up. 03:26, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willow and Ripple (M)
These are Willowfern and Rippleclaw from The Freedom Song. Willowfern is a cream she-cat. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  16:40, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. How the hell did you get so good at chararts? Not fair. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:34, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lolz, who knows. *Shruggs* I gues something inside of me just snapped! Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  23:26, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! I would say make the cream lighter, cause that's my idea of cream. But if you like the cream the way it is, just leave it. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:52, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I like the cream this way because this is my idea of cream. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  18:41, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 03:28, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

None from me ;D If this gets approved, I'll be a senior warrior 8D Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  03:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willowfern (Q+ K)
You can see now that I don't put any of my chararts for approval without shading. This is Willowfern and her kits. *From left to right* Maplekit, Bluekit, Pebblekit, and Rowankit. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  17:57, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

How cute. I am guessing Bluekit gets his/her colors from his/her father? :D F  e  a  t  h  e  r  21:18, August 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It's a he and yes, he did get his pelt color from his father. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  01:47, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

CUTE. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:34, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

THANK YOU!! One more thing, Feathereh. Bluekit got Rippleclaw's pelt color, but Maplekit got his tabby genes. Rowenkit's pelt color came out of nowhere. If you care, Maplekit got her pelt color from Creekshade, Rippleclaw's sister. Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  23:28, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd just darken all the noses and the paw a teeny bit. Other than that, it looks brilliant! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:51, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Better? And thanks, Claweh :D Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  03:38, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nightbreeze and Bearstep (M)
This is Nightbreeze and Bearstep from Rogue's Legacy (haha, the power of links >:D).

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 08:21, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Wow, it's hurting my eyes looking at this. Darkness. :D The Mourning  Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:34, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hi Millie. Your last post on this deleted the whole page, I don't know how, but I rollbacked it. F e a t h e r m o o n 02:23, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It happens whenever someone edits at the same time as you. It's really hard to fix. I knew it would happen, but I was using the school computers and my teacher was coming up behind me so I couldn't fix it. XD

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 05:51, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Mebbe lighten the tongue and nose on Bear, and the darken nose on Night. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:45, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll lighten/darken the noses, but Bearstep's tongue looks weird lighter. Trust me- I was clueless when I delved into the tongue colours and I tried everything out. Reuploaded

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:58, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfern (K)


Ew. This is seriously the worse charart I've ever made. The ears look like shit. I'll get the wordmark later and nosepink later. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:09, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. No comments from me, looks good. F e  a  t  h  e  r  20:29, August 11, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

You're out of your mind. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 20:34, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nah. I'm sane enough to be commenting on these. F e  a  t  h  e  r  22:43, August 11, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I effing hate it. Ew. It looks awful. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 22:55, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the words. XD Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 05:51, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

It is good Night! Just add (or define) nose pink. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:49, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

GOING. Jeez. :D Night  fern 5000 edits bitches! 22:30, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:22, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC)
Ugly, this is my first charart on here. Er...comments? Icestorm 15:43, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is NOT ugly Icy! It looks wonderful! Add some stripes on the tail, and if you want, get rid of the earpink. We don't use earpink on here a lot. xD 15:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Omigod. THIS IS AMAZING!! I agre4e with Raineh, add some stripes to the tail. Otherwise, it's perfect :) Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  15:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This really is good for your first charart. I remember my first charart. It's embarrassing. This looks great! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

You've gone into the earpink with the face stripe. You can scrap the earpink and leave the stripe as it is, or you could shorten it.This is looking great! Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:52, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, who posted this? Very nice. The shading on the right front left is a little dark, mabye lighten it--and fill the noes in Dark gray as well as the paw pads. ^.^ F e a t h e r  m o o n 22:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Agree. But she needs to get rid of the earpink. Doesn't look good at all, and Midnite told us not to. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 22:30, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I re-did the shading and got rid of the earpink. 'Tis better? 12:52, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Now just add the paw/nose pink! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:11, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smilestar (L)


Smilestar is a white she-cat with black specks. I know it's not the best, but I tried. Hazeleye 16:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

It's really good Hazeleye! Just lighten the nose a tiny bit, and mebbe darken the eyes a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I agree with Leopard. All I'm going to say is that you might want to smudge and blue the spots so they are at the same consistency. Some are bold, whereas others are very faint, smudged specks.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:55, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to smear the spots across the cat's body... they can be pretty much there with a little bit of smearing. A tiny bit of smearing. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   13:15, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypatch (Q+K)
Well here we are! I made a new fan fic starring her and another cat. You can find the link here: Ivypatch~ My Wrong Choice! Here are her and heer kits Rdkit (Red-brown kit), Duskkit (grey kit), and Fogkit (white kit) Ravenflight00  19:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good! All I'd say is the nose/paw pink is a tiny bit neonish. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  20:03, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

KK i'll fix that right away! Re-uploaded Ravenflight00  20:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Duskkit needs nose pink, or if he has it, make it darker.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:45, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

he does have nose pink... but it's grey nose pink! Ravenflight00 20:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a little darker, then. XD

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 23:17, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

kk milleh... but i have to do it tommorow... my mother orders me to get off (ha ha ha) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  23:44, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Firestorm (K)
Here is my cat. From A New Destiny: Brave Queen. My first Charcat up for approval XD. Firestorm is supposed to be a bright ginger tom with dark green eyes, and a long scar running down his flank. Well, that's all. Please tell me what needs to be fixed :3 【Cárdinal】 ショウジョ 23:42, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the words at the bottom. His nose is smudged with dark paint. The highlights are in strange places, sort of like patches or stripes. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 04:02, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

You've blurred the lineart far too much on the whiskers and paws. The highlights are smudged with dark colour around the shoulder and ear. You've smudged the lineart there too. Also, make the nose pink darker.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 05:24, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Note: Please understand that Firestorm is a bright ginger tom. So he's suppose to be a lighter color than a ginger.

Hilights on the haunch and shoulder look unnatural. Darken them. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:25, August 13,2011 (UTC)

There's more dark smudging around the rightveye. I'd blur all the highlights after you've darkened them, too.

Millie She must set th '''e lies ablaze... |undefined 20:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ferns of Night (MR)
Presenting the most beautiful she-cat in the universe.... Ferns of Night!

Ferns of Night is a drop-dead gorgeous, slender, fit, short-furred, sleek silver tabby she-cat with swirling tabby stripes, delicate, soft-featured facial features with white tipped ears with blue eyes flecked with green. She is the most beautiful she-cat that has ever lived, and an aura of silver light glows from her in life and death. I hate the aura I made around her.

MR means "Moon Rider". I used a Tribe blank because she is the Moon Rider of the Tribe of Moonlit Nights.

Ew. Can someone help with with some shading? I tried and it looked like ****. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 18:12, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help you Night. Other than that, it looks good. Perhaps make the nose a little pinker. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:01, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Right, done. I don't think the changes are showing yet, though. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:09, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

*awes* IT LOOKS FUCKING AMAZING. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 19:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it does. Well done. Hey Night, I could help make the aura a little more softish. If you'd like. F e a t h e r m o o n 19:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

HELP ME! lol. She needs to look amazing, after all. :D Night  fern 5000 edits bitches! 19:18, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

And, how did you do that, Leopardclaw? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 19:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I took the burn tool on size 50ish, burned down the back and over the ears a couple times. And the backs of the legs. Easy. For me at least. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:27, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Don't yell, it sucks. F e a t h e r m o o n 19:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

IT LOOKS AMAZING. Can you just make it silver if its okay? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 19:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

CENSORED

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Uhm...*Cry* F e a t h e r  m o o n 22:04, August 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Aww, Feather, I didn't mean to upset you... :(

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 23:08, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, no you didn't; but the aura I tried looks terrible. =\ F e a t h e r  m o o n 03:24, August 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

If someone gets rid of the nasty aura surrounding it, I'll approve this. >.> ...or at least some of it... No offense...it looks bad. XD 03:30, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, here I take back my fixing and leave it at Nights old one. See? Her aura is much nicer. F e a t h e r m o o n 03:51, August 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Actually, yeah it is. Plus, I don't think cats with auras take up half the image. XD 03:53, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Jaysong and Larkfoot
Comments? It is my first image. Bumblestripeluva100