Talk:Lifeblood/@comment-4870064-20120601123147

My thoughts as reading it: "Shinestorm, I am your father." Lol, gotta love that, no matter what the context!

"Don't grieve too much; sadness can equate to madness." you deserve a thumbs up, but you can't exactly do that on wikia....umm....take five money signs: $$$$$

I jumped. And then a giant potato flew by and carried me to the shore. Landing safely, I decided to follow the potato to Potato Land and I lived there happily ever after. The End.

My review overall: Why in the name of StarClan can't I write anything this good?! ':( It's a great story and I'm sure it will win.