Talk:Chasing Powers: Series 1 Book 1/@comment-4664331-20120414011222/@comment-4870064-20120414120321

not to sound rude, but tip: stick to one time of writing. Example:

Ivypaw nodded and sees Lavenderpetal padded away.

"Nodded" and "padded" are past tense, but "Sees" is current tense. You should stick with etheir current or past tense, because it gets really confusing if you keep switching in between the two.