Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

Furzestar (Leader) ~ For Approval
So, yeah. Here's Furzestar. He's supposed to have two jet black paws, but, you can't see the other one, due to the way the lineart's made. -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 15:52, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think the black is too smeared. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   16:11, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix it then. -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 16:22, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Look better? I personally like the black the way it is. -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 16:25, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute. No comments here. maple   leaf    17:02, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Mwahahaha! But there is a way to show the other jet black paw. Those lumps on his stomach are paws... but I'm guessing you want to avoid having something that looks like a black growth on his stomach.

- ♫Millie♫ ❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 03:33, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least Feathertail gets what I mean. xD -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 16:21, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lawliet (MCA) ~ For Approval
Here's Lawliet. A former loner who refused to change his name, due to the fact it reminds him of his mother, who was killed by a loner that went crazy. I may re-do this and add some patchy fur, but, for now, this is him. -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 16:28, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

He's beautiful! No comments. maple   leaf    17:02, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

It's lovely! One thing, possibly smudge the back leg shading a tad more - it looks kinda...odd.... Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:37, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Here we go again with Lawliet.....xD. Anyways, he is awsome! ✫ Ra in ey ✫ SUMMER TIME!  07:29, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rainey, shut up. You know about my obsession. It's not like it's much of a surprise. -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 01:00, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah. Leopardclaw, which back leg? He has two... -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 01:00, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The nearest one where there's a random blob of brown. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 19:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Better? =P -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 16:18, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. Now it's awsome! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:17, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I'm not sure what shade of Brown it's suppose to be, but right now it looks a little...greenish? I dont know X3 Fea  ther  Mew?  20:59, July 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I'll fix it later on. I can't atm. I use a mouse for my chararts, and I'm not home. xD -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 19:48, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardclaw (Apprentice)
Now a normal apprentice... Comments? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 19:22, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! There's a couple of spots that look a little weird; there's a tiny one and a half-open one, and a couple rectangular ones. Might want to fix that. Also, maybe add a couple to her ears and face, since the warrior version has it. Then blur it. maple   leaf    20:09, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did it in a hurry last time, so I just redid it.

Is anyone ever actually going to comment on this? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 08:56, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardclaw (MC)
As a medicine cat. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 19:22, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty. I noticed this one is a slightly different, lighter shade the the one above, but oh well. It seems she has a lot more spots than the apprentice version. Hm. Add a couple small ones to her face, and then blur everything. maple   leaf    20:09, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Silversong123 18:51, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Maybe you should point one or two of the spots on her face in a different direction, just so they don't look like growths or sagging/dripping somethings. :)

- ♫Millie♫ ❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 03:35, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The face is only meant to have the three spots on her left cheek. Further on in The Rise Series she get a long scar on her other cheek.

I see. Well, I have no problems with this one.

- ♫Millie♫ ❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 21:37, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this image has been removed due to theft issues. -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 21:53, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reupoladed I've redone her in the new lineart. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 10:56, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The image is tiny... I had that problem too.

- Sunrise over  sea  22:11, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

When you click on it it's full size. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 08:22, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Bravesoul (MC)
I've redone him too. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 10:56, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

If he's a tabby, I suggest adding tabby stripes on his legs. The scar looks a little.... long. I mean, if it's the way he's ment to be, then that's fine by me! Otherwise, no comments from me :) Kuroshitsuji  undefined  11:47, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The scar is meant to be long. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 06:57, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Like Silver said, Just the stripes on the legs ^^ Fea  ther  Mew?  07:24, July 17, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I did put some stripes on the legs... Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 08:49, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

You did? It must not be showing on my computer. all I see is some on the head, chest and back and tail. Fea ther  Mew?  20:57, July 17, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Pebblefrost (Q+Kits)
Well, I haven't had a charart posted in a while, So here is Pebblefrost, Dark gray she cat with half white body and Deep blue eyes, Silverkit, Small Silver she-kit with blue eyes and white-silver nose, And of course, Featherkit, Silvery tabby with dark gray hind paws, ear tips, tail tip and stripes, and white front paw, muzzle and chest. So yea. ;) Fea  ther  100 Edits!!  05:26, July 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

How did you find this blank? I want to use it! Anyways, It. Is. Cute! It looks awesome! :D ✫ Ra in ey ✫ SUMMER TIME!  07:06, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I have no comments. This. Is. Amazing. How did you move the kittens? maple   leaf    14:59, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

On Wildpath's dA account i just found the queen blank and used the tutorial for Windows 7 to move the kittens around. If anyone wants a certain amount of kits, or certain places for the kits, If Nightfern or Hollyfeather doesnt mind i could give you that blank. ;) and Thanks, Rainey and Nightfern. Fea  ther  200 edits!  18:41, July 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This is amazing, Feather!!!!! <span style="color:deepskyblue; background:gray; border:3px dotted skyblue; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:darkblue">Silversong123 18:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Silver ;) Fea  ther  200 edits!  19:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

NP! I totally love this! It's amazing! <span style="color:deepskyblue; background:gray; border:3px dotted skyblue; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:darkblue">Silversong123 19:55, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The queen blank is part of our blanks as well. Very cute!!! maple   leaf    20:38, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I do realize the queen is in the blanks, but like i could give people whatever amount of kits on the blank they want mabye.and thanks again. Fea ther  200 edits!  23:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

............Wow. This is neat! I love it, Feather! -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 01:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

OMG Cloudy!!!! And thanks! Fea ther  200 edits!  01:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I do hate to ask for comments, but does anyone have any remarks or critism? Fea ther  300 edits!  00:57, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

We don't have any. It's amazing. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:02, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Do you see where the black kind of has a corner thing on the muzzle on the right side but not on the left? I don't know what it would look like if you fixed it, buy maybe you should try? The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   18:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

er...what?? Fea ther  400 edits!  02:25, July 11, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Umm, Forest, you may want to dull down the explanation a tad. Even I don't understand what you're saying. -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 02:43, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think Forest means on the face where there's the grey bit, on the right hand side the grey reaches the mouth, but on the left it doesn't. Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:14, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Where I circled it, there's a clear, obvious difference. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   14:02, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I see now. But It's meant to be like that. Fea ther  Mew?  20:23, July 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ivybreeze ~ For Approval


You have to admit......this looks horrible. Anyways, comments? <font color="F5F540 ">✫ <font color="EB6E15" face="Segoe Script">Ra <font color="#4E62BA" face="Segoe Script">in <font color="#6cffde" face="Segoe Script">ey <font color="F5F540">✫ <font color="#65C452 " face="Segoe Script">SUMMER TIME!  14:01, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, it doesn't! I love the tabby stripes! She is from a fanfiction of yours, right? xD. maple   leaf    14:59, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! Maybe smugde the patches a bit more? <span style="color:deepskyblue; background:gray; border:3px dotted skyblue; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:darkblue">Silversong123 15:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Awwww! This is really cute, Rainey! All I have to say is blurr the shading a bit :D Fea  ther  200 edits!  19:35, July 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Oh, I was zoomed out before. Yes, smudge and blur them a bit. Too cute! maple   leaf    20:38, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''@Nightfern - Yeah, she's from my fanfiction. How does it look now? <font color="F5F540 ">✫ <font color="EB6E15" face="Segoe Script">Ra <font color="#4E62BA" face="Segoe Script">in <font color="#6cffde" face="Segoe Script">ey <font color="F5F540">✫ <font color="#65C452 " face="Segoe Script">SUMMER TIME!  13:53, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cute. CBA? Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:02, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, there is a whole buch of waste around the charart. when your done, save the charart as .png ;) Fea  ther  300 edits!  01:48, July 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I seriously don't see the waste.....does anyone see it besides Feather? <font color="F5F540 ">✫ <font color="EB6E15" face="Segoe Script">Ra <font color="#4E62BA" face="Segoe Script">in <font color="#6cffde" face="Segoe Script">ey <font color="F5F540">✫ <font color="#65C452 " face="Segoe Script">SUMMER TIME!  12:32, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. Not me.... Night  fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 13:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

So....what happens now? <font color="F5F540 ">✫ <font color="EB6E15" face="Segoe Script">Ra <font color="#4E62BA" face="Segoe Script">in <font color="#6cffde" face="Segoe Script">ey <font color="F5F540">✫ <font color="#65C452 " face="Segoe Script">SUMMER TIME!  11:08, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBA again Night  fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 22:21, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfang ~ For Approval


Stormfang is a large, gray-and-black tabby with fiery amber eyes. The reason why she wears the collar is because she used to be a member of BloodClan.

Yup, It ain't that great.. but this is my first Charart that I've posted on this wiki. Hope it can get approved!

SpazzyFox 21:48, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is awsome! Maybe add some tabby stripes on the tail and legs? Silversong Crowsight  21:59, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think. I was worried about callin' here a tabby... but, eh. I will later

SpazzyFox 23:38, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing. Like Silver said, add some stripes to the tail and legs. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:02, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a long time, Tis' this should be worked on soon. =\ Fea  ther  Mew?  05:33, July 18, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Stormpaw ~ For Approval
Ironic, the cat above mine is Stormfang. xD This is Strompaw. He's a character in Oliver and I love him to death. I had to use the tabby lineart (yes, I know the words are still there, but I'll see what you guys have to say before I go erase it) because I SUCK at tabbies. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   16:16, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Strompaw, dear Forestpaw?? xD Looks good, either way! -- L  Lawliet Always  the   Best~ 16:20, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, you get my point. I'll just go and remove the words since I've found myself having free time... The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   20:51, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I fixed it. :) The world's getting pretty big   in the window.   20:55, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute. :) If I may suggest, I'd blur the tabby stripes, because they look clear- too clear, to a point where it looks sort of weirdly sharp. Night  fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 21:18, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright :) The world's getting pretty big   in the window.   23:06, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Omg, cute! Fea ther  300 edits!  01:50, July 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Minnowpaw ~ For Approval
Minnowpaw everybody! So, this is Silversong's apprentice, Minnowpaw. Nightfern fanclans this arrogant feline. Silversong Crowsight  06:24, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cute!! ya making mosspaw too? lol! no comments form me! Fea ther  Mew?  06:28, July 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoob

I think the stripes should be made darker. But if it was what you intended for Minnowpaw to look like, then I have no comment. Looks AMAZING! <font color="F5F540 ">✫ <font color="EB6E15" face="Segoe Script">Ra <font color="#4E62BA" face="Segoe Script">in <font color="#6cffde" face="Segoe Script">ey <font color="F5F540">✫ <font color="#65C452 " face="Segoe Script">SUMMER TIME!  11:12, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Feathereh! I will make Mosspaw :) @Raineh, I intended for Minnowpaw to look like this :) Thanks, though! Silversong Crowsight  16:03, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, but blurr the stripes a small tad :D Fea  ther  Mew?  21:00, July 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Well, I uploaded the new version. I blurred the tabby stripes. Kuroshitsuji undefined  21:11, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

OK! Kuroshitsuji undefined  21:02, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and mabye make the green more natral colored, it's a little bright right now. Fea ther  Mew?  03:16, July 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Really? I think it looks OK. Maybe we should wait for Nighteh or Cloudskye or Forestpaw to say something. Kuroshitsuji undefined  11:44, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Kit tabby redline (not exactly for approval)
I was on chat with Silversong, and I asked her if she wanted me to make a tabby red-line for her, so here it is. For anyone who wants to use it. Comments or critism? Fea ther  Mew?  07:04, July 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This is awesome Feather! =D <font color="F5F540 ">✫ <font color="EB6E15" face="Segoe Script">Ra <font color="#4E62BA" face="Segoe Script">in <font color="#6cffde" face="Segoe Script">ey <font color="F5F540">✫ <font color="#65C452 " face="Segoe Script">SUMMER TIME!  11:11, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Feathereh! Silversong Crowsight  16:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

It looks awesome, but it looks more like a candy cane then a cat, to be honest. Too swirly. But it still looks awesome :) The world's getting pretty big   in the window.   16:06, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, here's an example. Just think of this as the type of swirly tabby, so yea.

Fea ther  Mew?  20:47, July 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This is great, Feather! Do you mind if I use it? I'm working on a tabby kit but I keep on stuffing up the stripes... XD

- I love the dawn's  shimmering light  21:36, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sure go ahead. That's what it's for. Fea ther  Mew?  23:21, July 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Of course you can use this, but eventually I'll have to take it down from here. xD. Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:14, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

That little brown tabby looks like Hawkfrost! D: Runnnn! Except Hawkfrost has a white chest...

- Sunrise over  sea  04:35, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Whaatt?! Run from Hawkfrost? Why? He's my future mate!! XD Fea  ther  Mew?  04:43, July 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I'm not going to ask why. XD

- Sunrise over  sea  07:29, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Flamepaw - For Approval
The cat Oliver and Stormpaw meet in the forest... what is he up to? The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   16:06, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh cute!!! Night fern 4000 Edits, Suckers! 00:14, July 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * D awesome! Fea  ther  Mew?  02:15, July 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Medicine-cat Blank- For approval
Cloudeh let me.... :3

Waddya' all think? Fea ther  Mew?  02:15, July 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Oh, and I fixed it so you don't have to fill in any white specks when you fill it in. Fea ther  Mew?  02:16, July 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

OMG. It looks amazing! Thanks, Feather! -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 02:17, July 14, 2011

Nice! Too bad I just spent an hour doing a MC... could you please leave the old MC blank so that we're not without one while this is being approved?

- Sunrise over  sea  07:08, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Our old MC blank was a violation of some copyright rules. So, I wouldn't think so, I would advise waiting. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   14:23, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Silversong Crowsight  16:07, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Should I redo Bravesoul and Leopardclaw and put them back up for approval if this is what's happening with the blank? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 19:33, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. You should. Sorry about the problems... -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 19:52, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

I see, Forest.

- Sunrise over  sea  00:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blueheart for approval
By Clover. She is a Blue she-cat with a white muzzle and pale green eyes.

She's lovely! Erase all the waste around the edges of the cat, but other than that, good! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 10:45, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Clover, could you explain how this looks exactly like my declinced charart, Bluemist? All of the shading comes out around the whole charart, just like mine. Also, if you look close at the ear nick, you'll see that the bloodmarking are exactly the same. The only difference is that..the pelt color is changed, and she has a white muzzle. Aww, come on. Didn't we learn from the whole leaf-issue? (I DID CHECK BEFORE TYPING THIS.) -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 12:25, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I was going to say that... hmmmm. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   15:08, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then what do we do? Decline it? -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 16:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. What's with the blue glow around it? It would need to be cleaned up. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   17:52, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

That was my fault. I goofed up on the shading and used too big of a brush. All Clover did was change the color. -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 19:28, July 15, 2011 (UTC)\

This does look like Bluemist. I think this should be declined, not just because of plagiarism but because of the strange blue aura around her.

- Sunrise over  sea  22:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll give you the hole story: I was making my own image, using Bluemist as an example. I had Bluestar's image from Warriors Wiki there aswell. I went to delete Bluestar's image when I deleted my own. I filled in Bluemist's image instead. I realised and thought it wouldn't matter. I coloured the image in, aware of the cut ear (I leaved it because I was going to do one anyway. I lightened the eye colour and finished the image. That was when I thought I should get rid of the mist around the outside. I tried and couldn't without deleting bits of the photo I didn't want deleted. I just put on the white muzzle and put it on the charart for approval. Should I redo it? Clover

So you filled in Bluemist instead of making your own, especially when she was declined? The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   16:20, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, redo her. I understand that you made a mistake... but next time, be more careful. If you want to know how to get the colours right on a cat next time, you should look at marking guides.

- Sunrise over  sea  23:23, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

By the way - what was the Leaf issue? CloverBlondestar

Someone took credit for drawing the leaf when they didn't, and we didn't that someone actully didn't draw it, so then someone saw that it wasnt drawn by that soemone, and told the person who actully had drawn the leaf, and we got in trouble becuase they thought we knew that that person had basically stolen the image, when we didn't. So it was called art theft so we took down the medicine cat image and used another blank but drew our own leaves. Fea ther  Mew?  20:56, July 17, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

No offence to the person who drew the leaves, but that is the dumbest art theft I've ever heard of. We're looking at the cat here, not the leaves. The person who actually drew the leaves could've just explained and asked to have their credit there instead.

- Sunrise over  sea  21:17, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

I've been reading over this, and I am going to decline this. I'm sorry Clover, but you can't do that. There are people here that can help you if you really need it. Come to me, for crying out loud. I am the leader of this project. 22:05, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

I realise. I shouldn't have done that. I am sorry. Clover

Feathermoon (MC) ~ For approval
Ewww, I hate the stripes.>.<

But either way here she is.

Fea ther  Mew?  19:36, July 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

O.O Wow! This is amazing! -- L  Lawliet WSW's  Resident   Fangirl~ 19:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * 3 Thanks! Fea  ther  Mew?  19:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon
 * What do you mean?! The stripes are AMAZING!!!! Maybe blurr where the white meets the gray, gray on the tail tip and back right paw? Don't know, just a suggestion. Kuroshitsuji  undefined  20:51, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Blur the paws and tail tip a bit more. Maybe even use smudge to get a more blended look. The stripes are awesome! We all know you're great at making tabbies, Feather, and this is no exception.
 * - Sunrise over  sea  22:08, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * - Sunrise over  sea  22:08, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Fallingleaf- For Approval


The guardian of my talk page is here!

- Sunrise over  sea  01:49, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! blur and smudge a tad bit more. Fill in the eyes, nose, and pads. Kuroshitsuji undefined  02:42, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I smudged and blurred until my eyes hurted. XD

- Sunrise over  sea  04:36, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, but smudge the star around a tad so it doesnt look so unnatral. Cats don't just have perfectly shaped stars on their pelts. XD Fea  ther  Mew?  04:44, July 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I randomly did the star because she's a StarClan cat. Yeah, that's right. She's DEAD. I'm seeing stars today.

- Sunrise over  sea  05:27, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah? Feathermoon has been dead forever. She is an ancient ancestor of her clan Nightclan XD Fea  ther  Mew?  05:28, July 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Reuploaded- I only added the star for fun, so now it goes.

- Sunrise over  sea  06:21, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Is this going to be critiqued? Nighty? Holly?

- Sunrise over  sea  22:23, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Milleh. I've been busy. Anyways... this looks really good! 18:30, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks!

- Sunrise over  sea  08:52, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hawk (Lo)~ For approval
Yupp. here she is. She will play a part in The Silver feather book i'm writing.

Description: Hawk is a sleek furred dark brown tortie with cream spots, darker brown pots, light ginger and dark ginger. She has one green eye and the other scarred and blind.



First charart in a while....meh

Fea ther  Mew?  23:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This is stunning, Feather! Make sure that the white patch over the blind eye doesn't go under the dark brown patch above. It looks a teensy bit unnatural.

- Millie-  200 edits!  23:58, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Unnatral? Calico/Torties have overlapping spots. Fea ther  Mew?  03:07, July 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather, this is amazing! Just fill in the nose! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 10:46, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! You've got to tell mehow you do this!!! Kuroshitsuji undefined  18:01, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeleye Medicine Cat Apprentice for Approval
She is a Long-haired ginger calico she-cat with unique hazel eyes and a long, bushy tail. This is my first charart so I hope you like it!

This is good, but did you click on the picture on the project's home page then copy and paste it into your photo library? You shouldn't use black to make the markings; use a very dark gray. The leaf should be green (unless it's like autmn). Then you just have to blur and smudge. Fill in the nose, too. Kuroshitsuji undefined  18:01, July 24, 2011 (UTC)