Talk:Last Summer's Day/@comment-3178467-20110102230321

Good start for a story but you need to add some discription about your suroundings and the animals. For example: Anna walked into the (green) colored animal shelter. Or: Anna looked at many cats. Two (gray) and some others but then she spotted a small little (orange) cat with green eyes. His small muzzle seemed to give away a smile. Those are some tips but anyway good story! :)