User talk:Nightfern/Fanfiction Tips

Hey, so, I noticed a little problem with your organization.

Any time a new idea is introduced: a new character speaking, a new action, even a new thought, you should skip a line. In the "organization" section, you didn't skip a line after "Oh, I do too."

Yeah, sorry, I had to point that out, LOL. "You were like WOAHHHH  and we were like woah!  And you were like woahhhhh." 23:51, June 8, 2011 (UTC)