Warriors Share Wiki:Create/Fanfiction Critiques

You can post your Fan-fiction and Songfiction on this page if you are a member of Project:Create. Please create a request for another member to critique your fanfiction, and the member you have selected will give a rating out of ten, and a detailed review of what they thought of the story, what parts they thought were good, and how you could improve. When your story gets a critique, the story will be left on the page for a maximum of a week, before the leader, Leopardclaw or deputy, Shadewing archive it. It is polite to leave a thank you message on the story after a critique.

How to give a good Critique

To create a critique, first give an overall rating and the reasons behind it. Then comment on the plot, the characters, the content, spelling and grammar and imagery, giving a subsequnt rating for each of these factors, with ways to improve, if there are any. The critique must have at least 100 words, or two paragraphs, and must be detailed enough for the author to make changes, not just 'The spelling is awful'. You must try and give a fair, unbiased review, regardless of whether or not the author is one of your friends. A further critique tutorial is avaliable Here

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Sunrise ~ Littlewillow
So, I read Leopard's blog and here I am. I don't care who critiques. I will edit now to make slight improvements! Little willow    Allons-y  20:04, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

From The Dust - Ducksplash
Yeah, so as said in Leo's blog. I think this was like the first fanfic I ever finished. xD 20:58, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

The Cure - Ducksplash
I want to get all of my finished storied critiqued. owo 20:58, January 12, 2013 (UTC)

Imprudent and Meek - Ducksplash
Same as The Cure^ 20:58, January 12, 2013 (UTC)