Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

Berrytail (Q+K)
Okay, so I probobly won't be putting charart for approval very often now, since the way I do them now takes so long. I have to make it transparent, and I have to go through pixlr and a buch of other thigns. and then I need tons and tons of layers, so overall one charart takes all day. Anyway, here is Berrytail (Cream and brown tabby she-cat), Ashkit, (Fluffy, pure black she-cat), and Oak-kit (Handsome, deep red brown tom). Please, don't comment on Berrytail's cream, It is cream. F e a t h e r m o o n 05:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The background's grey... oh, and make Berrytail's nose purplish-pink. Millie 05:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, the background isn't gray, It's transparent. And '''Reuploaded. ''' F e at her Rollbacker 05:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

WOWIE!!!! THIS.IS.AMAZING!!! Toboe Wolf's Rain Forever  14:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, Feather! This is gawjus!!! Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Tankchu guize. F e at her Rollbacker 21:31, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Can you blur the tabby stripes just a tad? I'm talking, like, have the blur tool set on... I'd say no more then 10% and blur 'em. 03:33, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Feather? You still working on this? You know the rules. 07:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shit. Okay, I don't want you to wait too long, and i'm not at home, so i'm just going to blurr it on pixlr. -.- F e at her Lolwut 21:26, September 8, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Cinderheart (Q+ K)
This is horrible. *wails* Cinderheart is a tabby, but I didn't want to add stripes because there was no room. I'll try again later. Any I will blur the shading later too. Other than that, comments? 10:42, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is fine, Rainey! Fill in the eye and nose pink for the yellow one and the cross-eyed looking one. Also, the yellow one is a little too... yellow. Make it more browny, or a gold colour, if that's what you call it. :) Millie 05:41, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! I had no idea you announced the winners until I saw this for approval, and I didn't even know this was for approval. x3 And just do what Millie says and what you are planning on doing and it'll be ready I believe! F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 00:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-uploaded. 01:02, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Haha Rainey. There's no 'For Approval' in the headings here anymore. I'll remove it.

Millie 21:52, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, Rainey...this looks epic. But, which one is which? 03:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

From right to left: Bloomkit, Silverkit, Duskkit, Eaglekit, and Sunkit. 05:15, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Would you mind filling in the dots on the last kit by Cinderheart's tail? <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-uploaded. 10:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Fill the noses, especially the nose and mouth on the far right ginger kit. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:39, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay.......I'm getting tired of this image. -_- 10:27, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Breezeheart (W)
Uh, this is Breezeheart and he appears in Starshine's Secret. Not a huge fan of this charart. Uh...Anyways, Comments? 16:19, August 25, 2011

The whiskers are a little too bold at the end. Did you colour in the lineart black? Millie 22:04, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I fixed the whiskers. I made a new layer underneath the lineart so it wouldn't overlap.

Did you blur the lineart? This looks... odd. 07:22, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Skye, I think it's the shading. Twilight, if that's the case, thicken the shading a tad and then blur it. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:29, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be going up to my cottage so I will not be able to work on these this weekend. 21:25, September 9, 2011 (UTC) (Also, I didn't shade...)

I'm going to withdraw this until I can figure out the problem.. 22:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Louise (L)
Another cat appearing in Strangers in the Shadows. Also, I think Imma gonna change her a bit and turn her into Lou from the Mysteries of MoonClan Series. Comments? Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  14:25, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! Sure beats Melody >_> Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  15:54, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

How come one of her eyes is darker? Just curious. XD Millie  20:54, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thin out the top line on the torn ear? 04:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuplaoded Miile: It's just the way the shading happened. Silver: No. Way. Ever. Full stop. Cloud: I have. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is this a tortie? There's too much white on here for that. Add a little more colour to it. 07:24, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There. Better? Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brightpaw (A)
If you ask, I did blurr and smudge! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  17:13, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a little more. Trust me, it CAN be done. 07:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know it CAN be done.... I'm not an idiot. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:14, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know you're not an idiot, because you made it look wonderful! =D CBA? 07:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, I was pissed there for a second. Didn't mean to be rude. Sorry, really sorry :) Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...undefined  00:45, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Berryheart (W)
Berryheart, everyone! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  17:11, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Purple eyes? Perhaps make them grey purple, it would look more natural. Also, blur the shading. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  19:07, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

They're meant to be purple because she as a weird eye desiese. I don't blurr the shading, it's not the way I like my chararts. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  19:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the colour of the eyes is bothering me. I'm sorry, but that color doesn't look right. Change it, please. 07:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

She's supposed to have purple eyes! She has a weird eye desiese (however you spell that >->). I even explained that in the story. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but it's too purple. <font color=#8E35EF>Try this color. The hex code is #8E35EF. Please...humor me and change it. If we don't like it, then you can change it back. 07:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

OK Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  00:43, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The colour looks nice, I think. Actually, I see no difference, but you know. Looks, good! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  16:58, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mikio (k)
Here is mikio! one of my best charart eveh! hope you like... it was hard doing all those colours and the collar changing into a bandana! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 20:57, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome, Raven! Hey, I think I know what I'll teach you first. Highlights and shading to make this awesome charart fully awesome! Millie 21:07, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

kk millie! show me! (you have an anxious apprentice here) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  21:59, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

First, click the tool that looks like a ping pong paddle. Then choose a 'fuzzy' brush and click three-four times on the areas you want to highlight. With shading, use the tool that looks like a hand pinching the ground and click about four times on the areas you want to shade. Don't change the brush dynamics like hardness or anything. Millie 22:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded: i put on shading! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 22:48, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now, can you blur said shading? 07:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

SURE! I'LL TRY TO DO THAT! (SORRY ABOUT CAPS) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  20:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'd suggest thickening the shading and adding some highlight. You don't have to, of course, but I think it'll help. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:34, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkle (KP)
This is my little sister's dream cat. I made it for her.The rainbow stuff underneath Sparkle is paint. Before you all scream and shout about it- it was my sister's idea! This is the way she wants it. Lion <span style="color: #4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC"&gt;"She's got a great mane of hair!" 05:49, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute!! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...undefined  14:59, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. You can't have unrealistic colors/backgrounds for charart. I understand it was your sisters idea, but post it in Tips and tests please, millie. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather's right. If you don't fix this, I'll decline it. It's against the few rules we do have. 00:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The spots are paint too... o.o I und erstand the rules. It's okay. I'll fix it up, but my little sister will probably be disappointed. XD Lion <span style="color:	#4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC">"She's got a great mane of hair!"  06:26, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

If your fixing it up, please follow through soon-- or else I will have to follow through with Skye and decline it. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Millie, please fix this or it will be declined. You have two days. 07:52, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 01:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

This still looks lovey, Millie! Personally, I liked the paint, but I also understand the rules, Skye. No Criticisms from me! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, I can put the paint one on my userpage. XD <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 21:51, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shadow (LO)
This is Shadow, Melody's evil brother. He has blood red eyes and red marks on his pelt given to him by the Evil Ones. The marks signify he is the chosen one to rid the world of love and happiness and replace it with violence and hatred. He has a gray sort of glow surrounding him. It's a barrier that blocks attacks of any kind. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  14:59, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

cute! i personally like evil cats! (like tigerclaw/star) no comments here! I love it! but i'm not a deputy or leader so i can't CBA! ~ ravenflight (not logged in at the time)

O.O Okay, this is lovely, but the shading is WAY to dark and wide. make it thinner and lighter, then blurr it please. Thanks, <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:17, August 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Well, he sort of must have a dark shading. He looks really bad without darker shading, trust me. Besides, I don't know how to fix this :( Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  22:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Could you try to maybe at least blur the shading, so it's a bit softer? 15:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  03:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This photo makes be quite un-easy. I would ask you to re-do this since the shading just won't work, but I can see you wored hard on this image. but i'm sure the shading can be lightened, can't it? You can at least try, and if it doesn't work, change it back-- please. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:33, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather's right. Try what you can, and if you don't like it, well, then we'll work something else out. =) 07:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Better? I redid him and fixed the scar 'cause the other one looked like a heart turned into an X scar >-> Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  22:33, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur just a bit more, and this'll be ready. 07:51, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading or the red? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think Skye means the shading. I don't think the red needs any more shading. One thing though. Is the cross on his chest a scar? If it is make it a light pink. It looks kinda beige. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:01, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'll leave Feathereh and Holleh to decide which to blur 'cause both look okay. In my imagination, scars are beige or something close to that. Many of the scars my brother has are beige/cream or something like that. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...undefined  18:41, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lou (L)
Lou is a kindly loner who ended up in StarClan rather than MoonClan. She's a main character in the Mysteries of MoonClan Series. The left eye is her blind eye - that's why it's all blurry. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:41, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

You've blurred some of the lineart too- the outline of the eye usually stays the same during blindness. Lion <span style="color: #4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC"&gt;"She's got a great mane of hair!" 06:27, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:31, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Leopard but I agree with Millie fix the lineart on the blind eye. --Hazeleye 02:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I did. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  09:16, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 07:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shadowfrost (w)
Hello! this is Shadowfrost from my story Shadowfrost's Mistakes hope you enjoy! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 15:49, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's awesome Ravenflight! As always lol. Hazeleye 19:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye this equals smiley face :)

hazeleye... thankies *turns into wolf animagus* (harry potter geekometer on lvl 'high') Kiba  The search for Paradise...  20:27, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''TEAM POTTER! '''If it's Harry Potter your never a geek! Hazeleye 02:07, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye AKA The American Hermione Granger

CBA? 07:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Annabelle (Lo)
This is Annabelle, Hazeleye's sister. She is a calico with odd purple eyes. Hazeleye 19:15, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

why is there white dots around the where the colour reaches the lineart? Kiba  The search for Paradise... 20:28, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I have NO idea why. It was just like that Hazeleye 17:00, September 1, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye is clueless

Raven, the lineart's just like that. Hazel, you could try redoing it on a tabby blank and fill the tabby stripes in white, then colour it in like this.

Lion &lt;span style="color: "She's got a great mane of hair!" <span style="color: 21:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, kind of confusing but I'll try it Hazeleye 18:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I tried doing the tabby thing same result any more suggestions? 76.116.97.52 22:05, September 9, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye needs ideas

Sorry that was supposed to be me! Hazeleye 22:07, September 9, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Blur the markings a lot. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:02, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Silverheart and Firepelt (Ma)
This is Silverheart and Firepelt from the Emberclan series. Silverheart is a beautiful Silver she-cat with stunning blue eyes and Firepelt is a handsome flame colored tom with emerald green eyes. Should a make Silverheart a tabby? Just asking, lol Hazeleye 02:23, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

If Silverheart is a tabby, then yes. Fill in Firepelt's nose pink, and maybe fix the white spots. <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I shouldn't be here..." <font face="Papyrus" font color="#000000">"But you are... <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I know..."  04:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Twilightheart200

I kind of imagined her as a silver tabby but never drew the tabby stripes... I'll fix that right away. Hazeleye 11:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye Aren't they so cute together?

They're very cute! Make Firepelt a bit darker, and darken his tongue and nose pink. Also, you've gone over/ smudged the lineart on Silverheart's tail. I think she should stay a tabby- they make good mates! :)

Lion &lt;span style="color: "She's got a great mane of hair!" <span style="color: 21:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, just a question how do you unsmudge lineart? Hazeleye 18:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye with a feather in her hair XD

I'd say take the Sharpen tool and try that. I've never had to do it before. xD 07:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

LOL way to make me feel stupid! Jk, love ya Cloud! Hazeleye 21:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Reuploaded: I fixed Firepelt's color and the sharpen tool worked thanks Cloud you're awesome! Hazeleye 21:42, September 7, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

It's still a tad blurred, but, I'm not bothered by it. Also, Firepelt looks much better since you changed the colour. 07:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! was worried you might not like the color! Hazeleye 02:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

This does look really good now! No criticism! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Starpaw (A)
This is Starpaw from Welcome to StarClan. Comments? <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I shouldn't be here..." <font face="Papyrus" font color="#000000">"But you are... <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I know..."  15:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head, and blur the haunch shading. 15:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I shouldn't be here..." <font face="Papyrus" font color="#000000">"But you are... <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I know..."  18:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights ever so slightly. 07:30, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be going up to my cottage so I will not be able to work on these this weekend. 21:25, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlight to the face. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 22:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerkit (K)
This is Tigerkit, the protagonist of Frosty Shadows. I willbe putting up the main characters over the next week, this being the first. Comments? Tigerfrost 23:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes have lighter outlines around them. Blur the stripes.

Lion &lt;span style="color: "She's got a great mane of hair!" <span style="color: 06:29, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add nosepink. <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I shouldn't be here..." <font face="Papyrus" font color="#000000">"But you are... <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I know..."  19:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I really don't care how it's done, but, please, fix the outline. xD 07:30, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

What I would try, (and have done in practice) is start out with the blank, and click Layer > Color to Alpha > and then ok, then fill the background in white. Color the picture in underneath. That's what I do, just a suggestion. :P 22:25, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I used Photoshop for this, so ur idea doesn't help. And, there is nosepink, it's just blurred a bit. andddd, the stripes are supposed to have the lighter colors on them. But I don't know what's wrong with the outline... Tigerfrost 16:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, add a layer under this image and color it in: (It is transparent)



Just trying to help. 19:38, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Try using Pixlr or Gimp for charart. They're much easier to use, and they're free.

<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid # The Tides of Change 01:46, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, no. I can't use Gimp or Pixlr if my life depends on it. however, i understand the transparency issue. i'll fix this by tomorrow. Also, thx Twilight ;) Tigerfrost 15:38, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Starshine and Breezeheart (Ma)
This is Starshine and Breezeheart as mates. Comments? 20:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The nick on Starshine's ear is a bit too big... make it less wide.

Lion <span style="color: #4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC"&gt;"She's got a great mane of hair!" 06:06, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's a streak of white on the forehead of the light gray (or is it silver) cat. Fix it. 07:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 04:00, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nick in the ear is still too big and awkward. Other then that, there's really nothing wrong with this. 07:49, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it later. Homework :P 22:22, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be going up to my cottage so I will not be able to work on these this weekend. 21:24, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Jaybriar (W)
Dear Cloudskye, I am very sorry for disobeying the 20 rule. Love Leopard. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  16:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. I just got a little annoyed, that's all. 17:09, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, darken the highlights. 17:09, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aww, the shading is pants. Could someone pwease help me blur it because Pixlr blur tool fails. D: Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chase(Lo)
Chase from Warrior's Destiny. He's a golden-brown tom with amber eyes. &lt;span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid # The Tides of Change 20:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC) Wow! Anmazing as usual Millie! Just make the nose pink. Cats don't have brown noses.  Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  19:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to make it brownish pink or an orangey pink. I'll make it more pink. :) &lt;span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid # The Tides of Change 20:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes look reddish. could you fix that? other than that it's great! Hazeleye 03:17, September 10, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

They're meant to be a deep, reddish amber. It's just the shading on his eyes.

<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 22:07, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blueleaf (W)
Yes, the shading is rubbish. No I couldn't be bothered to blur it. Yes, I promise to blur it. Wait till you see her sister. D: Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

No way! This is amazing! You don't need to blur. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...undefined  15:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

You can blur it if you really want to. I'm not forcing you to do anything. 23:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redleaf (W)
Yes the shading is even more rubbish than Blueleaf. Leopard hates solid cats. Leopard feels depressed because her shading has failed. D: Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  14:14, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Me thinks you should blur the shading. You don't have to if you don't want to, though. 23:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Millie thinks you could smudge the outside of the shading if blurring doesn't work.<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 21:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)