Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

'''This is a page for all charart for approval. Feel free to comment on someone's cat. Please re-upload your charart every time there is a concern or comment. Please put topics on Heading 2 and the name of the cat with the words "For Approval".'''

'Only a total of 5 (five) images per user may be up for approval at one time. If you have another one to put up, please wait until one of your other images is approved.'

Spottedpaw ~ For Approval
Spottedpaw of RiverClan. Comments? Nightfern Merry Christmas 21:39, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

We're not sure if we're allowed to comment here, but we might as well.

D: Cute. What color are the spots? I think you could make them a tad bigger. E: deres no such ting as improving 4 dis CF: I like it. I'm quite attracted to golden cats.

3 Days To Christmas! 00:56, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, thanks the 3 of you. I don't want to make the spots bigger because otherwise it would be a gold-and-black cat, and the spots are black. Nightfern Merry Christmas 01:58, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! Maybe you could blur the spots a tiny bit? I don't know if that would work out well, but....-- Happy Holidays!  21:44, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

There's some spots on the back leg that doesn't look right. I'm going to fix it. Nightfern Merry Christmas 01:16, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

The spots on the back leg don't look quite right... as you noticed... do you wanna fix that? f o r e s t y 15:22, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

~Re-uploaded~ Hmm... not sure.... comments? Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 20:29, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be some parts of the legs that could use a bit more bluring. If you look closely, you can see there are still some that could look better. The most noticeable ones...look near the eye and nose; and the back left paw. (second-to-last one from the right). Holly C M  V  T   Class   of   2011   ♥  17:47, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry it's taking so long. I've been lazy. I'll try to do it today. Nightfern Let's go diving! 12:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Pumpkin~ For Approval
Here's Pumpkin the kittypet from my fanfic Last Summer's Day. -- How can it be 2011 already?  21:58, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

He's adorable! Lighten up the pads a bit, it's too neon. Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 22:10, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. Pads are a bit too neon. That's an excellent pelt color as well. Holly Fire You  Make Me Smile ♥ 13:28, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Quakepaw ~ For Approval
This is Quakepaw, an EarthClan apprentice from my upcoming fanfic Set in Stone. Comments? f o r e s t y 14:28, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I see ear pink! Get rid of it! We don't need that here. I'm not going to be picky about that. Other then that..hmm... Interesting pelt color and name. Holly Jordan  You   Are   A   Dork   ♥  17:45, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, don't be so hard Holly (xD) I love the pelt color; it's so relaxing, for some reason. Go ahead, laugh. I like her! Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 19:38, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her name will be explained, don't worry. And I don't see what's wrong with ear pink- as long as it's not annoyingly obvious, I don't see the big deal- and I can barely see it in the thumbnail, so... yeah. And I can barely do anything with my touchpad (faill). So... yeah. f o r e s t y 21:41, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. I won't harp you about the ear pink. I understand that resources are limited. xD Holly  feather  -  Class   Of   2011  14:09, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ahahaha limited resources. xD f o r e s t y 21:46, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Am I allowed to say CBA on my own?? Because nobody's commenting. :P f o r e s t y 00:48, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Forestpaw, you have to wait for Holly or Nightfern to say CBA. Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 16:14, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Kris ~ For Approval
Here's Kris. My evil loner. Hehe. He's a got a pelt with a mixture of two differentshades of gray and some white. I don't even know if this type of pelt is possible..but..he looks cool! Holly

He's beautiful, Holly! Amazing! Lighten up the nose pink; seems a little bright to me. Otherwise, he's ''stunning. Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 19:37, January 11, 2011 (UTC)''

Well, thanks Nightfern! I will admit, it took me 2 hours to get the pelt just right. He was originally supposed to be black. xD and Re-Uploaded for the nose pink! Holly 20:07, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

He looks amazing! Forest? Anyone? I don't know why the words are so small. It's annoying. Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 20:25, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Night. And I have the answer to your question. There was a problem with the wiki yesterday, and it seemed to goof up a lot of the edting. I think that's why it got all weird. Holly undefined17:38, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I had a look at the coding and nothing seemed to be wrong... strange... but it is Cloudskye's siggy that's messing it up, I will say that. And THIS LOOKS AMAZING OMG f o r e s t y 21:49, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! How's it my fault?! And thanks FP!! ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the coding's causing a problem. Create a testing page and see if it is. Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 19:20, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! I sure wouldn't wanna cross his path! XD Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 22:06, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, River! I always like your opinion! ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

=D Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 23:04, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Flash~ For Approval
My cat, Flash, from the up-coming sequel to my short story, Burning_Shadows, Dusk at Day! yes, he becomes a loner, and there will be more plot to it! Keep watch for it!

We all agree that this pelt type might not be possible, but anyhow...

D: Fabulosa! (learning spanish) CF: Brilliant. Love the eyes. E: Lucky, you can actually blur!!

So overall it's great! Dystanine :3 CrystalFace :3 Eaglet :3 23:44, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with EaglesPack; however you'll have to make the lineart black again and erase the words. Otherwise, it's beautiful! Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 23:53, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks very well done! However, what Nightfern said is correct. Holly

This is wicked awesome! But I agree with Holly and Nightfern. Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 22:03, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Is that pelt style even allowed? Hmm.. The colors... As cool as it looks, I'm not entirely sure that it's possible to have that. It kinda looks like a fire. I like it. Let's see what Night and River say. ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  19:49, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Right before this comment, put Re-Uploaded, Swifty. Nightfern Let's go diving! 12:58, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stormkit ~ For Approval
Here's Stormkit, the kit from my new story. His eyes were supposed to be green, but, for some reason, the color green I wanted to use didn't come out right. So, I changed it to blue. Cloudy

EDIT: Ignore the statement about the eyes. I was having problems with the file, and I managed to get the original copy uploaded. Finally! Holly

Is he a tortoiseshell? I love him! Holly, I deleted your siggie because I wanted to test if it was clogging up the text. Sorry. -- Nightfern Snowsong and Bearclaw 19:19, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

It's understandable. I have a complicated signature, which is now fixed and back to how it was. And yes, Stormkit is a tortie. It took me, like, two hours to blur and smudge that dang pelt. ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

He's beautiful! Maybe smudge a tad more. Nightfern Let's go diving! 12:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Snowpaw~ For Approval
I can't believe I haven't made Snowpaw! Oh my gosh! Here she is! Nightfern Let's go diving! 21:42, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! =D Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 22:01, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

How cute! I love it! ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tiger ~ For Approval


Hey everyone! Did you all miss me? XD Anyways, this is Tiger, one of my loners! Enjoy! Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 22:01, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. My. Gosh. Tiger is amazing! You should be deputy, River. Nightfern Let's go diving! 22:21, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

No way Nightfern! I always thought you and Holly should be leader/deputy! You both do amazing work! But thanks! Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 22:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tiger is sooooooo cute! ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Holly! =D  Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 16:12, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Honey ~ For Approval
Here's Honey, a kittypet, she's really sweet (as her name states XD) and very friendly. Comments? Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 22:34, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

She's amazing! Are these from your fanfiction- wait, do you have fanfiction? Blur the back shading. -- Nightfern Let's go diving! 23:01, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cute name for a cute kittypet! ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! And I blurred the back shading all the way, I lightened the shading a bit cause it looked a little dark to me. Riverpelt Leader of StormClan 16:11, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Mistpaw~ For Approvel


Anyone who wants to give me tips on improving, please feel free to leave me a message on my talk:page and leave tips for a better charart next time. Sorry It's so small. Goldenflower Raven and Gold 00:44, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Size problem fixed. Is there any ways that you could fix the white that shows up when you fill Mistpaw in? ♥ Holly  feather  ™  ♥  15:11, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think you used pure black, Otter. Try dark dark grey and blur and smudge the paws a lot. By the way, Mistpaw is a black-and-white she-cat- she needs patches and a you need to add white paws to her description in the alliances. Nightfern Let's go diving! 12:52, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks you two! I appreciate the tips. I have one question though, when I try to make a charart and then I try to save it, it won't let me name it. It only says 'Format'. Then when I try to post it on Charart for Approval, it says "I will be posting up an illegal format. What can I do? Goldenflower Raven and Gold 15:33, January 15, 2011 (UTC)