Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Charart for Approval

Whisper~ For Approval
Whisper is a gray she-cat with a white belly and green eyes. Comments? Rainhead ICEFERN50 19:05, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful! I like the little collar design! VERY NICE USER!!!! 19:11, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thank You! Rainhead ICEFERN50 19:13, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but can you blur where the gray meets the white? -- Phillies  Phan Red  and   White 18:22, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Ni ght fern ♥ Kate and Will forever ♥  19:54, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? ☼ Nightfern   ☽  Sun and Moon

Also, lighten the pad pink. ☼ Nightfern   ☽  Sun and Moon

OK Sorry i've been gone things have happened and i'm trying my best to stay. ★Icey★ 22:51, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Decline? Sabrina  Doberman Fever 20:09, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

I like it! I'll do it if I have to, but keep it. "You were like WOAHHHH  and we were like woah!  And you were like woahhhhh." 15:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Omigod, at my school, everybody's saying that quote... lol. You want to blur and smudge it? night   fern    21:11, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstripes~ For Approval


I know I haven't exactly joined yet, but I have left a message on the disscusion page asking, so I'm putting this up right now. This is Silverstripes, deputy of PoolClan, in the Fanfic PoolClan. She is the main charecter. this is my first charart, ever, so it may not be purrrfect.(LOL) Silverstripes A black and Silver hero

I thumbed the image. Anyways, this is good for your first one. Try blurring the tabby markings a little bit. -- Phillies  Phan Red  and   White 20:31, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Blur the tabby markings. Also, colour in the left hind paw properly. But great job with the highlights... I never got them on my first try! You're going to be great at chararts! - ♫Millie♫ It’s getting cold outside... 07:04, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you are. Sabrina  Doberman Fever 00:42, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The changes aren't showing yet, but I blurred the stripes so much it hurts my eyes:).Silverstripes19:40, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm... maybe if they aren't looking different after blurring, use a little smudging carefully. And again, colour that left hind paw. - ♫Millie♫ ❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 00:21, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to start with a thinner line for separating the paw and leg line, with a hard tip, and then blur and smudge it. night   fern    21:11, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it Silverstripes.Deputy.SS. please, and every time you change something, click on the picture, click on the little magnifying class in the corner, and press "Upload New Version of File". night   fern    11:22, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ripplepaw~ For Approval
Okay, people. I re-did him today. Took me hours just planning and placing every streak, the shape, the size, the perfect color. I made him a different version of a tortoiseshell-like this one - where it's mainly a black cat made up with many streaks of orange to create a pattern like that. I like the way he looks, in my humble opinion. Comments? night   fern    01:29, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">He looks like a tartan tortoiseshell! Pretty! I can't really think of much to comment about on this one. CBA?

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">- ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 08:55, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Mwahaha, only Holly and I are allowed to say that. Thanks a lot. though!!! night   fern    10:20, June 7, 2011 (UTC) Oh, right. I didn't know the Doberman sig was yours. I meant possibly CBA. XD - ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 00:19, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is really neat. I don't think I have the attention span to sit there and do something like this. -- Cloud skye Bye  Otter  splash~ 15:20, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

♥♥♥ Aww, thanks!!!!! I was afraid somebody would say it wasn't good or anything. Haha, I don't either, Holly, but I forced myself to. night   fern    20:11, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, so cute, so utterly EPIC!! *dies from epicness...* I love this! (No helpful comments, but...) Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 20:45, June 8, 2011 (UTC) I say instant approval. Anyone against that? -- Cloud skye Bye  Otter  splash~ 22:04, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

No not me!!! I ♥ this kitty :D Fea  ther  Save Japan!  03:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Awww thanks guys!!! night   fern    21:11, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Cross-scar - for approval
How does he look? He's going to appear in The Steps of a Warrior very soon (And no, I'm not telling)... Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 15:48, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shadows more on the hind legs, and darken the scar. May be even add patches of lighter scar t make it look like a serious injury?

- ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 20:18, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, that's a large scar, isn't it? Or is it like a burn? I think it looks a bit strange on the ear... its like its discolored, not a scar. Maybe re-color his orange head and a add a thin scar that doesn't cover his whole head and if you want to wound to look fresh, make it a bit more red. night   fern    13:32, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Cross-scar obviously indicates the cross shaped scar, but not the ears. You could pretty much do the scar anywhere.

- ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 21:50, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It is a scar, so after reading what you've all said, I'm going to give you a little background on the character. He is involved in a border fight as and apprentice, Blazepaw. A cat claws down his face giving him the scar, and his name. This is after he become a warrior. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:44, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok. So he went through the name-changing ceremony, I presume. Thanks for telling us. Now it looks like a scar. Maybe you should add a little scar somewhere insignificant, like on a hind leg, just as an extra battle scar so we know this isn't a burn. Most warriors have little scars.

- ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 20:39, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yup, and he chose his name. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 06:34, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

That's a bit cruel, lol. The color of the scar is bugging me... it's a bit too purple, I think. Can you add more red in it? It's a scar, not a human's bruise. night   fern    11:17, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it Cross-scar.Warrior.LC. please and every time you change something, click on the picture, click on the little magnifying class in the corner, and press "Upload New Version of File". night   fern    11:19, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 13:14, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Excellent. Nice scars XD. I reckon this is good- but Nighty can elaborate and all that.

- ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 20:32, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

im not sure how defined the stripes are actully suppose to be, but if they are suppose to be visibly a tabby, i suggest define the stripes. This is awesome! Fea ther  Save Japan!  23:29, June 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

They are only meant to be faint. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 06:34, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. night   fern    16:43, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Holly, what do you think? night   fern    18:03, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Splashfur~ For Approval
I haven't signed up yet, but can someone add me in? Splashfur starts out as a kit in A death of shadowclan, but since there was a kit named Splashkit that was also tortiseshell, i thought I had better make him a warrior charart. Also, can someone help me? I can't get rid of the white line around the lineart.Ivystorm

Are you using the full sized line art? Did you click on the warrior image to open it then save it, or did you just save the image that was there? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 06:28, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yes.. that appears to be the wrong size. I added the right alignment. Also, erase the words.

- ♫Millie♫ <font color="#357EC7">❄It’s getting cold outside...❄ 07:45, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 1em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">You need to start over by clicking on the P:I photo and then downloading it. When you do that, then I can help... for now, I can't see the tortie very close. night   fern    13:20, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerpetal~ For Approval
<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Mwhaha! This is going to be the first elder that's going to be approved... nobody wants to make the old people, do they? She's a cream she-cat with blue eyes. night   fern    13:20, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">I would say lighten the whole body if she's meant to be cream, but if you want the colour like that, it's your choice. Other than that it looks great! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 15:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

The cream colour looks fine to me. Although, if you want to change it, go straight ahead. -- L.  Lawliet Death  Note   Dreaming~ 17:49, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll lighten it up a tad. night   fern    22:53, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Silvernose Kit ~ For Approval
Silvernose, Feathermoon's sister as a kit. Silvernose appears to play a pretty important role in The silverfeather series, although i havent shown in the bok yet ;) Fea  ther  Save Japan!  13:25, June 17, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Lovely! I can't think of any critisism for this at all. Great work Feather! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 15:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm, yes. I was just thinking though, shouldn't her name be Silvernose? Unless she has more than one nose... night   fern    22:53, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yea...I was spelling Nose wrong...

Oh jeez, Feather. lol. She's beautiful. night   fern    17:53, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Grayshadow~ For Approval
Grayshadow is a gray she-cat with green eyes.Comments? ☘Blue <font color="Black">Spark☘ 19:55, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is great, but I thought you had to be a warrior before putting charart up for approval? "You were like WOAHHHH  and we were like woah!  And you were like woahhhhh." 21:26, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Post up a request first, Blue Spark. Other than that, is this your first? She's beautiful. night   fern    22:53, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

OK sorry bout that. Very sorry. And thank you. ☘Blue <font color="Black">Spark☘ 17:47, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, don't apologize. It's fine. night   fern    17:53, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

OK i made a request! ☘Blue <font color="Black">Spark☘ 17:58, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

You've joined! night   fern    18:02, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yay lol. So how is meh kitteh? ☘Blue <font color="Black">Spark☘ 18:05, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

She's amazing. Nice shadows and highlights. I, the deputy, can't make freaking shadows... grr... (they seem to hate me, I'm not kidding). Do you want to keep the nose black or pink? night   fern    18:08, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

How bout black? Is that ok with you? ☘Blue <font color="Black">Spark☘ 18:09, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blindeye~ For Approval
This is WindClan's youngest elder, who was a warrior before a really really REALLY pissed bunny clawed his eye sight out. If you look close you should see a couple of scars.... I don't know if they've shown up. night   fern    15:48, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ah yes, I see a scar over his right eye. I would suggest defining the scars. Other than that, this is lovely! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:48, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re-upload it right now. night   fern    17:53, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined scars and added more. I also used a pale pink, a darker one, and a red, and blurred them all together. night   fern    18:02, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Bravesoul - For Approval


Lots of cats seem to be getting scarred for life in The Steps of a Warrior. Huh. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:59, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mm, I love the stripes! Thin out the scar a bit... just a bit; it's a little too thick. night   fern    18:02, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it Bravesoul.MC.LC.png, please. night   fern    18:04, June 18, 2011 (UTC)