Warriors Share Wiki:Create/Fanfiction Reviews and Suggestions

You can post your Fan-fiction on this page if you are a member of Project:Create. Other members will then give a rating using the grade scale and a small review, telling you what they liked, and some small ways on how to improve. For detailed critique of your work, then place a critique request on the Fanfiction Critiques page. When the story has not had a rating or comment for two weeks, it will be archived by the leader, Nightfern or the deputy, Leopardclaw. The page limit for fan-fiction posts is 15.

 The Grade Scale 

The grade scale begins with level zero (0) and ends at level ten (10). Zero is a story that shows no detail, incorrect grammar, spelling, and a boring plot. On WSW, our goal is to create colorful, descriptive fanfiction, so our stories should not have a grade of zero. Ten is a story that is superior to all others; it shows great detail, main idea, correct spelling, grammar, and an overall interesting plot. Five (5) is a story with potential that could use some work. Please, if a more than two (2) users grade a story more than 4, do not grade the story a zero. It's rude and may result in rebuke.

Archives here.

LeafClan-Lies of Life
I don't really know how much I like this. This series has lain dormant for a while. 17:59, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Imaginary
First songfic review! Personally I like this a lot. 17:59, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Great song, great job. 9. 17:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Stand in the Rain
My best one ever. 19:06, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Great song choice, great writing. 9. 15:55, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The Storm
I'm only on to chapter two, but I want any comments no matter how bad. ♥ A  v  a  l  a  n  c  h  e   Love  ♥  16:54, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

7.5. It's very short without much detail and kind of choppy. But the beginning was nicely done, it grabbed me and kept me reading. 17:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Spikyfur and Ladybug
I wanna put it up as my first spotlight, so I need a review. Rowan fall  *Glass Clink*  Poison!  I mean...  Cheers!  04:06, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

8. It's good. A nag: In the prologue you put 'The she-cat (who was obviously called Ladybird)'. I didn't think that flowed too well. You also did it later on, something about small muscles. It's obvious her name, so you don't really need to point it out, if you see where I'm coming from. 16:03, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I see your point, Elo, but I didn't have a character named Ladybird XD (don't I know who you meant :P) Rowan fall  *Glass Clink*  Poison!  I mean...  Cheers!  19:25, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darkening Clouds
My fisrt completed story, but I want comments so I can fix it up or leave it like that. ♥ A  v  a  l  a  n  c  h  e   Love  ♥   00:35, April 11, 2012 (UTC)