Warriors Share Wiki:Imagine/Approved Charart

Coco- KP
She's one of the main characters in my new story, Maze of Shadows. She's a brown bicolour point she-cat with deep blue eyes. Yes, I know. I failed. XD Lion <span style="color:#4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC";"She's got a great mane of hair!" 05:49, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Damn, Millie, yours is way better than mine. This is brilliant! No Comments. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Leopard. XD Lion  "She's got a great mane of hair!"  06:35, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

No comments for days, Approved. F e at her Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather (T)
Here's the main character in my new fan fic Tribe of Rushing Water~ Feather's Story! Ravenflight00 21:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! A tribe cat! Looks great, no comments here. F e  a  t  h  e  r  07:03, August 10, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Aww, sweet! Maybe darken the pink a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, great colors. The Mourning Color RIP, my dear Flashy 14:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanx! Hey morning colour, are you nighty? Ravenflight00 12:13, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I am. :) Night  fern 5000 edits bitches! 17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, and this should be ready. 03:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  07:34, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this? F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

yeah still workin... busy Kiba  The search for Paradise...  19:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded! 'Sorry it took awhile but i think this might be good!!' Kiba ''' The search for Paradise...  12:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Skye? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 01:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this. Feather? 03:18, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Damn. I'm late. Approved. F e at her Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Smilestar (L)
Smilestar is a white she-cat with black specks. I know it's not the best, but I tried. Hazeleye 16:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

It's really good Hazeleye! Just lighten the nose a tiny bit, and mebbe darken the eyes a tad. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:47, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I agree with Leopard. All I'm going to say is that you might want to smudge and blue the spots so they are at the same consistency. Some are bold, whereas others are very faint, smudged specks.

Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:55, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to smear the spots across the cat's body... they can be pretty much there with a little bit of smearing. A tiny bit of smearing. The world's getting pretty big  in the window.   13:15, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Reuploaded: I started over and used a different thing for the specks and didn't blur or smudge. Is it better. Hazeleye 15:04, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye, May this charart go better than my last

Comments? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 01:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Feather? 03:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nor do I. CBA? F e at her Rollbacker 00:36, August 30, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Thanks! Your seal of approval gives me joy Hazeleye 19:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye, filled with love

Approved! F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Starshine- (PH)
She's the new cat in Rogue's Legacy and Warrior's Destiny... but how does Eagle know her? She's a beautiful silver she-cat with sparkling, deep blue eyes. Millie 08:35, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! She's really pretty! Possiblt soften and lighten the tongue and nose, they look too bright against the grey. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  08:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded (and she was a cave-guard before... whoops! Millie  23:03, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, *Double looks* beside the tounge are actually teeth, fill them in a very white yellow. Cat teeth arn't exacily white. F e a t h e r m o o n 00:45, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Reuploaded Millie  03:41, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

making the two spots beside the tongue as teeth is very creative! i like it, before i read the comments i was going to say this: Colour in those two spots by the tongue. But scince they're teeth why bother? lol Kiba  The search for Paradise...  14:01, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 01:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Feather? 03:32, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nor do I. CBA? <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 15:20, August 27, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Approved. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Frostflower (Q+K)
My first charart! Hope you like it XXWolf SongXx 15:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

this is very nice! ~from ravenflight00

Lovely! Fill in the eyes and nose pink on the kits. Also, they look a bit too purple. Make them more grey. Millie 22:10, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! On the tail and ears of the queen, you've blurred/smudged some lineart. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:02, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

They look purple cause they're blue-grey cats... maybe i made them a bit too blue... >w< XXWolf SongXx 19:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blue-grey is not that purple. Try looking at Silversong's dark blue-grey charart and get an example of what you're doing. The blue kit is a bit too blue. I'll post some examples of blue-grey shades on your talk page to help you out. :) Millie  05:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Here, I coloured in the kittens' noses, and i made them less blue. i also fixed all the blurred lineart (hopefully all of it) Is this good?? What else needs fixing?? XXWolf SongXx 19:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

lookin good Kiba  The search for Paradise...  21:31, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! Sorry about the shades... my mum came back from Europe yesterday and I had no time to do it. XD Millie  05:42, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

No comments in days. Approved. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ripplesplash and Gingerheart (Ma)
this is charart i decided to do hope you enjoy! (i don't know about you guys... but expect imediate approval! LoL!! This is one of my greastest chararts!) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  23:06, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Just one thing, on your orange and white cat, the orange patch on the foreleg, there's a tiny spot where it went over the lineart. :3 Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  13:50, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''kk thanx shadey! i'll work on fixing that! Kiba ''' The search for Paradise... 13:54, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Raven, are you still working on this? 04:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded: is this better? or does it look the same? ~RAVENFLIGHT (not logged in at the time)'''

No comments in days, Approved. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Starshine (Q+K)
Okay! My first Charart. This is Starshine and her kits from Starshine's Secret. This Charart Includes: Starshine, Juniperkit, Blackkit, Dovekit, and Tinykit. Anyway, comments? I know that the torn ear looks terrible. I'll fix that later

Loverly! On the kit with the dark gray patches, some have gone over lineart. 03:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded; Fixed coloring over lineart (i think) and torn ear. Twilightheart

You've forgotten the paw/nose pink on the queen. Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  09:11, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Added Paw/Nose Pink. Not Sure if changes are showing, yet (Aug. 25, 11:16 AM)

Make the black patches on the black and grey kit lighter so they stand out from the lineart. Millie 21:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Made them lighter.

Good; No comments in days, approved. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 05:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Sophie (KP)
She's a kittypet who will be appearing in Strangers in the Shadows. She's based off a cat in real life. To be honest, she didn't turn out quite like I wanted, so I'm a bit disappointed. Comments? Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  09:10, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely Claweh! (Can I call you that)? I find nothing wrong with it! 12:51, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Sure you can! Silver does. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is a Snowshoe cat, am I correct? And looks good. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:34, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I don't know. She's a friend's cat. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  08:29, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful! I can't do my cat... he's missing a leg and his tail, after all. Millie 22:29, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wow... Night  fern 5000 edits bitches! 01:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. THIS TOTALLY ROCKS!!!!!! Feathereh, Snowshoe cats have white socks. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I do believe this represents a siamese :) Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  14:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Silver, I really don't know. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  14:29, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, Silver is right. Look at this photo -- It just looked similar exept for the paws.

Looks beautiful! CBA? 04:55, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

She might be a snowshoe point. You never know. XD

Lion <span style="color:	#4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC">"She's got a great mane of hair!" 21:14, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 07:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Davy (KP)
I dunno why the background's coloured in. I'll fix it later. Davy will be seen along with Sophie. I have more to upload, but I'm at my limit, although the others have all been on CBA for a while... I'm babbling. Comments? Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  09:10, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

-_- didn't you read my comment on my charart? it's called Transparent. Oi. Try erasing the "colored background" if you don't believe me. -_- <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 03:03, August 26, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather, I actually did just colour in the background by accident when I filled in the white. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:42, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

But it's transparent at the moment. sorry i acted all weird on that last one, I was having a bad hour i suppose. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 08:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It's ok Feather, I can be grumpy too. Reuploaded with a normal background now. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  08:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur more where the white meets the blank on the head. Looks good! 04:56, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:12, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 07:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sun (Q+K)
*Spoilers alert!* Don't worry, her rogue image is saved for the contest. Yes, she has had kits! Her kits are Storm Clouds (dark grey she-cat with a scar over her eye and pale yellow eyes), Dawn Skies (Dark flame-coloured she-cat with blue eyes), Spring Rain (Long-furred golden she-cat with green-grey eyes) and Whistling Reeds (Light brown she-cat with deep emerald green eyes). Millie 22:04, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white on the ginger and white kit, please. 03:37, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I already blurred it heaps... it just stands out against the ginger. Trust me... I blured and smudged every single pixel into submission. XD Millie  07:38, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I could be a bitch and MAKE you blur it before I approve it, but, that's not how I roll. Approving now. 07:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspaw (A)
Ugh, don't hate me Feathereh! I'm sorry this is a load of crap >_> Ugh, comments? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  17:11, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't yell at you, Silvereh! :D

It actually looks good, just darken the nose a whole bunch and then make the eye color a little more orangey, it looks nearly red-brown. Thanks, <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Thanks! I'll have to do that a little later, though. Spottedfang has a friend over and I have to watch them both because my parents are really busy! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  23:14, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  23:50, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the changes are showing, did you darken the nose? It still look really neon. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 00:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I'm sure I darkened the nose! Maybe the changes aren't showing, but I know I darkened the nose. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...undefined  01:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine. Approving. 07:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Willowdawn (W)
Jaybriar's mate. I <3 Her! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  09:51, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

love it! really good! i wish i could CBA Kiba  The search for Paradise...  15:48, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Don't say that, Ravenflight-- >:3 you never know what might need to be done in others eyes that may look perfect to you, as in, Leopardclaw, would you mind defining the eye color a tad more? It looks somehwat dull. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 00:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

kk sorry feather! but it really is good though... to me lol Kiba  The search for Paradise...  01:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the stripes a bit more. Looks awesome Leopard! 15:25, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

That's really good Hazeleye 19:20, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Reuploaded Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:34, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. 07:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC)
Ugly, this is my first charart on here. Er...comments? Icestorm 15:43, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is NOT ugly Icy! It looks wonderful! Add some stripes on the tail, and if you want, get rid of the earpink. We don't use earpink on here a lot. xD 15:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Omigod. THIS IS AMAZING!! I agre4e with Raineh, add some stripes to the tail. Otherwise, it's perfect :) Toboe  Wolf's Rain Forever  15:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

This really is good for your first charart. I remember my first charart. It's embarrassing. This looks great! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

You've gone into the earpink with the face stripe. You can scrap the earpink and leave the stripe as it is, or you could shorten it.This is looking great! Millie She must set th e lies ablaze... 20:52, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, who posted this? Very nice. The shading on the right front left is a little dark, mabye lighten it--and fill the noes in Dark gray as well as the paw pads. ^.^ F e a t h e r  m o o n 22:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Agree. But she needs to get rid of the earpink. Doesn't look good at all, and Midnite told us not to. Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 22:30, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I re-did the shading and got rid of the earpink. 'Tis better? 12:52, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Now just add the paw/nose pink! Leopard claw  Clouds and Claws have come!  19:11, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if your still on vacation or not, Icestorm. But just work on this as soon as you can, please. F e a t h e r m o o n 04:34, August 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Beautiful! Better than I could've done that's for sure! I would actually use this for one of my stories. Hazeleye 16:50, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye gives her seal of approval (I wish it actually mattered)

Comments? Night fern 5000 edits bitches! 01:14, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

If Icestorm doesn't work on this in a few days, I'll decline it. She just got back from her trip, I think. 03:22, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry for not editing this! I'll work on this as soon as possible, I'm so sorry for not editing as much. Sorry! 23:31, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Icestorm-- Please work on this or it will be declined. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-Uploaded: Done. 23:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

See...Icy? :D We told you it doesn't look bad! Just look at it now...CBA? <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 13:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Approved. 07:58, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Silvershine (MCA)
This is Silvershine as a medicine cat apprentice from Heart of the Clan. She is a silver she-cat with blue eyes and scars across her eyes. Anyway, Comments? TheStarsAlign Silvershine 03:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is good! No comments! Leopardclaw Lost and alone in Twolegplace 07:54, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! TheStarsAlign Silvershine 02:18, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 07:31, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

None, approved <font color=#153E7E face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #153E7E;">F <font color=#1589FF face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color=#1589FF face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color=#1589FF face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color=#153E7E face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Lolwut 16:48, September 9, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Brightpaw (A)
If you ask, I did blurr and smudge! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  17:13, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a little more. Trust me, it CAN be done. 07:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know it CAN be done.... I'm not an idiot. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:14, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know you're not an idiot, because you made it look wonderful! =D CBA? 07:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, I was pissed there for a second. Didn't mean to be rude. Sorry, really sorry :) Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...undefined  00:45, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lou (L)
Lou is a kindly loner who ended up in StarClan rather than MoonClan. She's a main character in the Mysteries of MoonClan Series. The left eye is her blind eye - that's why it's all blurry. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:41, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

You've blurred some of the lineart too- the outline of the eye usually stays the same during blindness. Lion <span style="color: #4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC"&gt;"She's got a great mane of hair!" 06:27, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:31, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Leopard but I agree with Millie fix the lineart on the blind eye. --Hazeleye 02:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I did. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  09:16, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 07:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shadowfrost (w)
Hello! this is Shadowfrost from my story Shadowfrost's Mistakes hope you enjoy! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 15:49, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's awesome Ravenflight! As always lol. Hazeleye 19:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye this equals smiley face :)

hazeleye... thankies *turns into wolf animagus* (harry potter geekometer on lvl 'high') Kiba  The search for Paradise...  20:27, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''TEAM POTTER! '''If it's Harry Potter your never a geek! Hazeleye 02:07, September 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye AKA The American Hermione Granger

CBA? 07:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Q+ K)
This is horrible. *wails* Cinderheart is a tabby, but I didn't want to add stripes because there was no room. I'll try again later. Any I will blur the shading later too. Other than that, comments? 10:42, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is fine, Rainey! Fill in the eye and nose pink for the yellow one and the cross-eyed looking one. Also, the yellow one is a little too... yellow. Make it more browny, or a gold colour, if that's what you call it. :) Millie 05:41, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! I had no idea you announced the winners until I saw this for approval, and I didn't even know this was for approval. x3 And just do what Millie says and what you are planning on doing and it'll be ready I believe! <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 00:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-uploaded. 01:02, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Haha Rainey. There's no 'For Approval' in the headings here anymore. I'll remove it.

Millie 21:52, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, Rainey...this looks epic. But, which one is which? 03:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

From right to left: Bloomkit, Silverkit, Duskkit, Eaglekit, and Sunkit. 05:15, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Would you mind filling in the dots on the last kit by Cinderheart's tail? <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Re-uploaded. 10:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Fill the noses, especially the nose and mouth on the far right ginger kit. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:39, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay.......I'm getting tired of this image. -_- 10:27, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:02, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. 18:16, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Louise (L)
Another cat appearing in Strangers in the Shadows. Also, I think Imma gonna change her a bit and turn her into Lou from the Mysteries of MoonClan Series. Comments? Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  14:25, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! Sure beats Melody >_> Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  15:54, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

How come one of her eyes is darker? Just curious. XD Millie  20:54, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thin out the top line on the torn ear? 04:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuplaoded Miile: It's just the way the shading happened. Silver: No. Way. Ever. Full stop. Cloud: I have. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is this a tortie? There's too much white on here for that. Add a little more colour to it. 07:24, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There. Better? Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Much. Approving. 18:20, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Berryheart (W)
Berryheart, everyone! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  17:11, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Purple eyes? Perhaps make them grey purple, it would look more natural. Also, blur the shading. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  19:07, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

They're meant to be purple because she as a weird eye desiese. I don't blurr the shading, it's not the way I like my chararts. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  19:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the colour of the eyes is bothering me. I'm sorry, but that color doesn't look right. Change it, please. 07:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

She's supposed to have purple eyes! She has a weird eye desiese (however you spell that >->). I even explained that in the story. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but it's too purple. <font color=#8E35EF>Try this color. The hex code is #8E35EF. Please...humor me and change it. If we don't like it, then you can change it back. 07:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

OK Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  00:43, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The colour looks nice, I think. Actually, I see no difference, but you know. Looks, good! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  16:58, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There IS a difference, trust me. Approving. 18:21, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Mikio (k)
Here is mikio! one of my best charart eveh! hope you like... it was hard doing all those colours and the collar changing into a bandana! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 20:57, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome, Raven! Hey, I think I know what I'll teach you first. Highlights and shading to make this awesome charart fully awesome! Millie 21:07, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

kk millie! show me! (you have an anxious apprentice here) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  21:59, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

First, click the tool that looks like a ping pong paddle. Then choose a 'fuzzy' brush and click three-four times on the areas you want to highlight. With shading, use the tool that looks like a hand pinching the ground and click about four times on the areas you want to shade. Don't change the brush dynamics like hardness or anything. Millie 22:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded: i put on shading! Kiba  The search for Paradise... 22:48, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now, can you blur said shading? 07:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

SURE! I'LL TRY TO DO THAT! (SORRY ABOUT CAPS) Kiba  The search for Paradise...  20:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'd suggest thickening the shading and adding some highlight. You don't have to, of course, but I think it'll help. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:34, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

here... i tryed to do as you told... you may notice some of the blurred lineart on Mikio PLEASE NOTE THAT I TRIED MY BEST FOR THE LINEART NOT TO BE BLURRED Kiba  The search for Paradise...  21:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Approving. 18:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkle (KP)
This is my little sister's dream cat. I made it for her.The rainbow stuff underneath Sparkle is paint. Before you all scream and shout about it- it was my sister's idea! This is the way she wants it. Lion <span style="color: #4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC"&gt;"She's got a great mane of hair!" 05:49, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute!! Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...undefined  14:59, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. You can't have unrealistic colors/backgrounds for charart. I understand it was your sisters idea, but post it in Tips and tests please, millie. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather's right. If you don't fix this, I'll decline it. It's against the few rules we do have. 00:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The spots are paint too... o.o I und erstand the rules. It's okay. I'll fix it up, but my little sister will probably be disappointed. XD Lion <span style="color:	#4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC">"She's got a great mane of hair!"  06:26, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

If your fixing it up, please follow through soon-- or else I will have to follow through with Skye and decline it. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Millie, please fix this or it will be declined. You have two days. 07:52, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 01:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

This still looks lovey, Millie! Personally, I liked the paint, but I also understand the rules, Skye. No Criticisms from me! Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  06:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, I can put the paint one on my userpage. XD <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 21:51, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Approving. 18:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Starpaw (A)
This is Starpaw from Welcome to StarClan. Comments? <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I shouldn't be here..." <font face="Papyrus" font color="#000000">"But you are... <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I know..."  15:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head, and blur the haunch shading. 15:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I shouldn't be here..." <font face="Papyrus" font color="#000000">"But you are... <font face="Papyrus" font color="#bebebe">"I know..."  18:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights ever so slightly. 07:30, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be going up to my cottage so I will not be able to work on these this weekend. 21:25, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlight to the face. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 22:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. 18:25, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Annabelle (Lo)
This is Annabelle, Hazeleye's sister. She is a calico with odd purple eyes. Hazeleye 19:15, August 31, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

why is there white dots around the where the colour reaches the lineart? Kiba  The search for Paradise... 20:28, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I have NO idea why. It was just like that Hazeleye 17:00, September 1, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye is clueless

Raven, the lineart's just like that. Hazel, you could try redoing it on a tabby blank and fill the tabby stripes in white, then colour it in like this.

Lion &lt;span style="color: "She's got a great mane of hair!" <span style="color: 21:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, kind of confusing but I'll try it Hazeleye 18:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

I tried doing the tabby thing same result any more suggestions? 76.116.97.52 22:05, September 9, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye needs ideas

Sorry that was supposed to be me! Hazeleye 22:07, September 9, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Blur the markings a lot. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:02, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I tried thAT and then i triued filling it in by handf and it didn't work :( Hazeleye 21:40, September 19, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye doesn't know what to do

It's fine. I'll approve it now, and we can fix it later if need be. 'kay? I know some lineart is hard to work with. The loner one is one of them. 18:26, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Starshine and Breezeheart (Ma)
This is Starshine and Breezeheart as mates. Comments? 20:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The nick on Starshine's ear is a bit too big... make it less wide.

Lion <span style="color: #4AA02C;Font-family: Kristen ITC"&gt;"She's got a great mane of hair!" 06:06, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's a streak of white on the forehead of the light gray (or is it silver) cat. Fix it. 07:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 04:00, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nick in the ear is still too big and awkward. Other then that, there's really nothing wrong with this. 07:49, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it later. Homework :P 22:22, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be going up to my cottage so I will not be able to work on these this weekend. 21:24, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. 18:28, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Jaybriar (W)
Dear Cloudskye, I am very sorry for disobeying the 20 rule. Love Leopard. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  16:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. I just got a little annoyed, that's all. 17:09, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, darken the highlights. 17:09, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aww, the shading is pants. Could someone pwease help me blur it because Pixlr blur tool fails. D: Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it on Sumopaint. Dunno how much better it is. Oh, and BTW, when I said pants, I meant rubbish, not clothes. That would be silly. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:02, September 17, 2011 (UTC) (Yey, new sig!)

D'awwww pretty! Approving 'cause no one's said anything in over a few days. 18:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Chase(Lo)
Chase from Warrior's Destiny. He's a golden-brown tom with amber eyes. &lt;span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid # The Tides of Change 20:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC) Wow! Anmazing as usual Millie! Just make the nose pink. Cats don't have brown noses.  Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  19:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to make it brownish pink or an orangey pink. I'll make it more pink. :) &lt;span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid # The Tides of Change 20:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes look reddish. could you fix that? other than that it's great! Hazeleye 03:17, September 10, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

They're meant to be a deep, reddish amber. It's just the shading on his eyes.

<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #	3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 22:07, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Those eyes look cool! Approving. 18:31, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redleaf (W)
Yes the shading is even more rubbish than Blueleaf. Leopard hates solid cats. Leopard feels depressed because her shading has failed. D: Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  14:14, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Me thinks you should blur the shading. You don't have to if you don't want to, though. 23:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Millie thinks you could smudge the outside of the shading if blurring doesn't work.<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid 3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"The Tides of Change 21:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded To be honest, I don't think this is much better. Oh well. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:38, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. 18:33, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudskye (the crazy aunt)
She's not really a warrior, per say, which is why I didn't use the right blanks. She's the crazy aunt from Rainey's story. Silver tabby with darker paws and a tail tip. Enjoy. I'm blessing you with my work. 03:59, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Did you add the nose color? If you did, darken it please. Otherwise, beautiful! 23:14, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

That was me being a derphead. I forgot about the nose color. Stuff like this is what happens when you have no life. 02:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is my last charart. Approving. 03:52, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shadow (LO)
This is Shadow, Melody's evil brother. He has blood red eyes and red marks on his pelt given to him by the Evil Ones. The marks signify he is the chosen one to rid the world of love and happiness and replace it with violence and hatred. He has a gray sort of glow surrounding him. It's a barrier that blocks attacks of any kind. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  14:59, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

cute! i personally like evil cats! (like tigerclaw/star) no comments here! I love it! but i'm not a deputy or leader so i can't CBA! ~ ravenflight (not logged in at the time)

O.O Okay, this is lovely, but the shading is WAY to dark and wide. make it thinner and lighter, then blurr it please. Thanks, <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 21:17, August 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Well, he sort of must have a dark shading. He looks really bad without darker shading, trust me. Besides, I don't know how to fix this :( Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  22:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Could you try to maybe at least blur the shading, so it's a bit softer? 15:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Better? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  03:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This photo makes be quite un-easy. I would ask you to re-do this since the shading just won't work, but I can see you wored hard on this image. but i'm sure the shading can be lightened, can't it? You can at least try, and if it doesn't work, change it back-- please. <font color="Orange" face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color="red" face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color="Orange" face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Rollbacker 04:33, September 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Feather's right. Try what you can, and if you don't like it, well, then we'll work something else out. =) 07:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Better? I redid him and fixed the scar 'cause the other one looked like a heart turned into an X scar >-> Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  22:33, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur just a bit more, and this'll be ready. 07:51, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading or the red? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think Skye means the shading. I don't think the red needs any more shading. One thing though. Is the cross on his chest a scar? If it is make it a light pink. It looks kinda beige. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:01, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'll leave Feathereh and Holleh to decide which to blur 'cause both look okay. In my imagination, scars are beige or something close to that. Many of the scars my brother has are beige/cream or something like that. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  18:41, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Yeah, I meant the shading. Sorry. =/ 17:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Kk Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  22:01, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred the shading. but I doubt you'll see it. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:07, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 18:36, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Meh. No comments from me. Though he looks sort of patched. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 23:46, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, it's fine. We're not PCA, so don't get all picky. XD 07:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

No comments from me!

<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 22:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! No comments! Grace glow  Believe   18:23, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blueleaf (W)
Yes, the shading is rubbish. No I couldn't be bothered to blur it. Yes, I promise to blur it. Wait till you see her sister. D: Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

No way! This is amazing! You don't need to blur. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  15:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

You can blur it if you really want to. I'm not forcing you to do anything. 23:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this. CBA? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:41, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nah... Night  fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 23:48, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Silver - Skye? 13:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 19:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Treeheart (W)
Kinda spoilers for my fanfic...I have his warrior name picked out...Treeheart. Comments? 21:21, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is amazing! Just fill in the nose pink and all will be well... XD Leopardclaw  Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  07:17, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! :) <span style="color:#AE5CE0; background:#D9B9EB; border:1px solid #BE6CD9; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #BE6CD9;"> TheStarsAlign <font color="#AE5CE0">Silvershine 16:15, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes are too orange. Darken 'em.

3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"&gt; The Tides of Change 07:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Don't worry about "Too orange". <font color=#153E7E face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #153E7E;">F <font color=#1589FF face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color=#1589FF face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color=#1589FF face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color=#153E7E face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Lolwut 00:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Beautiful! CBA? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...undefined  22:38, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 19:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Twilight/Twilightkit (K)
This is Twilight/Twilightkit from Loyalty is What Matters. She is a black she-cat with one white paw and blue eyes...I have to scold myself for this one. I don't like it. <font face="Chalkduster" font color="#99FFFF"> ★Starshine★   <font face="Chalkduster" font color="#3366FF"> Froony  <font face="Chalkduster" font color="#3366FF"> the <font face="Chalkduster" font color="#3366FF">Ball  02:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely Twilight! I don't know why you think it's bad, cause it isn't! Leopard  claw  Look up  to the past…  07:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think this looks fine. CBA? (Holleh, I don't friggen know how to move these images XDD) Silver 12:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

lol. Silver, just copy the whole section and paste it to the Approved Chararts page. 13:24, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approved.

Lionstrike (W)
Love him to death <3<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 20:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white meets the rest of the pelt color. 22:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okayz. <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 08:41, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Great job with the highlights. :) Night  fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 12:03, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I tried to make him as handsome as possible. :) <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 21:18, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? 13:12, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! CBA? 21:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

No comments from me! Grace glow  Believe |undefined 16:38, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Nice job. 19:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hazelkit (K)
*Dodges books and tomatoes and high tails it out of there* Omigawsh I am so ashamed. I mean, look at stripes. THE STRIPES!!! This took me two HOURS to make. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  00:44, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oi, I blurred like crazy >-<** Don't tell me you love me...  Then brake my heart...  00:46, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's so pretty! <3 It's so beautiful it's not fair. :D Night  fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 12:00, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Aww thanks, Nighteh ^-^ Silver

No problem. :) Night  fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:32, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Skye and Silver? 13:09, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Yay! 19:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwillow (Child)
Comments? -- 02:25, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. Mind lightening it up a little? 23:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I change her description, and copied Rainlegs's style of shading. xD 12:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

She looks like an exact copy of Rainlegs, only darker. CBA? 19:39, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 14:59, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lizardclaw (W)
Ew. If anyone wants to take a shot at the shading for me go ahead. *shrugs* I don't mind either way. I CAN'T GET THEM RIGHT. Okay, enter Lizardclaw. WindClan she-cat, light brown tabby, with yellow eyes. Comments? Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look quite good Night. They aren't bad. Darken the nose pink a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with Claweh. Maube blur the stripes a tad, they kinda stand out. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  19:53, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I meant shading, sorry. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 20:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 11:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

*cough cough* lol. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 23:24, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm take her off so that other users can add theirs... we're at the 20 limit, damn. 13:23, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

No comments, looking good! Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:44, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Meep. 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is awsome. END OF STORY!!! CBA (don't even try to condridict me Nighteh! It's awsome!!) 00:01, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Shadowpatch (MC)
I know you've hardly heard of her, but she'll be important when I get to RainClan's story and a bit in LeafClan-Lies of Life. A bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did you shade this? 'cause if ya did, blur it a bit more please. =P You're PCA, so you should know better. (jk, just pickin.) 07:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

On her haunch, the top looks darker then the bottom. If it's shading, I would blur and smudge it more. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 12:03, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shading fail sorted. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's amazing! CBA? 01:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lizardclaw (W)
Ew. If anyone wants to take a shot at the shading for me go ahead. *shrugs* I don't mind either way. I CAN'T GET THEM RIGHT. Okay, enter Lizardclaw. WindClan she-cat, light brown tabby, with yellow eyes. Comments? Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look quite good Night. They aren't bad. Darken the nose pink a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with Claweh. Maube blur the stripes a tad, they kinda stand out. Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  19:53, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I meant shading, sorry. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 20:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 11:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

*cough cough* lol. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 23:24, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm take her off so that other users can add theirs... we're at the 20 limit, damn. 13:23, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

No comments, looking good! Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:44, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Meep. 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is awsome. END OF STORY!!! CBA (don't even try to condridict me Nighteh! It's awsome!!) 00:01, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Shadowpatch (MC)
I know you've hardly heard of her, but she'll be important when I get to RainClan's story and a bit in LeafClan-Lies of Life. A bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did you shade this? 'cause if ya did, blur it a bit more please. =P You're PCA, so you should know better. (jk, just pickin.) 07:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

On her haunch, the top looks darker then the bottom. If it's shading, I would blur and smudge it more. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 12:03, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shading fail sorted. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's amazing! CBA? 01:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:54, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Foxpelt (MC)


&nbsp Alrighty here's Foxpelt! She's teh MC in Willowfeather and the Hawk. She mentors Vixenpaw, later Vixenshine. She's glowing because she's involved in a prophecy and the glow is a force field so that she can't be attacked. She's so epic XD ~Mooneh (Loudsplash)

What's up with the aura around it? Delete all of that first. Night fern He told me to catch a lobster for him! 00:33, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Did you read the info? It explains why. She's suppost to have it. She's suppost to glow. 12:03, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

At least blur it to make it more natural. 02:57, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

... I'm pretty sure the explanation wasn't there when I saw it. 13:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten the nose/paw. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED i had no clue how to get it up :| 16:28, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the paw/nose pink. Also, I fixed your siggie... The 's' in sig needed to be capitalized. 19:46, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is cute! Darken the nose pink just a teensy weensy bit. 21:57, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mkz and thankies. And REUPLOADED 11:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Good! CBA? 00:19, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved~ 14:53, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs (Child)
Rainlegs wanted me to help her put this up. Comments? -- 04:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! 23:15, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Child?<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 21:21, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. It's supposed to be like this. It's for the story. 01:34, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok.<span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 07:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments, approve, or abandon?

Darken the nose pink a tad and it'll be on it's way to a CBA ^-^ 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 00:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:53, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Eagle (Lo)
I failed the missing eye. XD <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 07:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

No you didn't! Just blur it a bit more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Really? You don't think so? Ok. I'll blur it. :) <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 19:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded #6D7B8D; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #6D7B8D;"&gt; For two years the wind blows... 07:06, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good to me! Grace glow  Believe |undefined 18:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Glow.

Blur the eye a lttle more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  10:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. 19:41, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Yep. Same here. Grace glow  Believe |undefined 19:49, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Leopard and Glow, but I've blurred every single pixel on that eye as much as I can.

Hmm. Maybe it doesn't need much blurring. Doesn't seem important, really. Ghost glow BOO! 14:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I see you've worked really hard. CBA? 00:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Approved! 14:43, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... Silver? You actually have to move it.

Star (Lo)
Well this is Star. Not sure I like her, but hey ^_^ Fix the photo if you can, I don't think I uploaded it right. Grace glow Believe 19:39, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's very cute! Darken the nose pink nad blur and smudge the paws. 19:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hmm. Even I agree the nose pink was too light. Grace glow Believe 20:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Whyyy did it get so biggg? O.O Grace  glow Believe 20:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps you uploaded it full sized instead of thumbnail. Dunno, really. But it's gorgeous. It may just be my awful eyes, but I think I'm seeing blurred lineart on the head, ears, and right hind paw. :3 Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms...  01:05, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Nope. I didn't blur anything, just blurred my eyesight checking XD Ghost  glow BOO! 19:09, October 12, 2011

(UTC)

I told you my eyesight was bad. Sorry, Graceglow. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 19:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Amazing, really. The highlights look perfect, you added the right amount and everything. CBA? <font color=Black face="Vivaldi" size="5" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #153E7E;">F <font color=Orange face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color=Black face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px dotted -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">at <font color=Orange face="Century Gothic" style="background:; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; #ffffff;">her <font color=Black face="Century Gothic" style="background:;">Scared yet? 23:46, October 15, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Moon (Lo)
Here she is. Moon is a dark gray tabby with blue eyes...Comments? (I failed shading/highlights :3) 20:34, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

OMSC, Twilight, this is AMAZING! Lighten the nose. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darn it. I'm trying to think of something to critique, but I can only fall back on 'Lighten the nose'. Good job! Grace glow Believe 20:42, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks, you guys... :) 21:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks amazing! I can't find any flaws! CBA? 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nooooo comments! Now it's just PERFECT. Ghost glow BOO! 19:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

*Jaw drops*. Gawjus. ^^ <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:05, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 14:42, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Windfur (D)
I've probably failed this upload. (You haven't. Love Leopard) I PROMISE he will become a major character. He will be very major! Grace glow Believe 20:05, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

He looks good! BLURRRR. The stripes. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:10, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Personally, I can't see a difference >.< Grace  glow Believe 20:22, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'd make the point of the stripes a little longer, and a little sharper. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  20:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now the haunch one's bugging me >.> Grace  glow Believe 20:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Better! Now, maybe add another stripe in between the tail and the last stripe on the back. I think that would even them out a little. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  07:41, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Grace glow Believe 09:10, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the paws a little. <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:21, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! Ghost glow BOO! '''20:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this? 11:37, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yup....*Stewie Griffin voice* Just waitin' for some comments... Ghost  glow BOO! 16:52, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is good. CBA? 21:13, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 16:50, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Eagleheart x Willowfeather (M)
You know, I really like this one, but one thing I can say...I hate tortoiseshells XP and technically she isn't one she just has a few tortoiseshell patches. She has a page so you can check her if you want. Alrighty then, comments? 15:09, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Loudsplash, but this will be declined. You must follow the 20 rule, meaning only 20 chararts on the page at once, or Skye will get annoyed. And next time, make the picture a thunbnail, full size is too big. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  16:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch that. I thumbed it. Obviously some of the CBA's have been approved. Blur the shading on the blue cat. And I would suggest making him a more grey blue than solid blue. It looks quite unnatural. Leopardclaw Lost and alone  in Twolegplace  17:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, reuploaded. I didn't make her blue-gray because he's suppost to be blue act, believe it or not. :P Anyway, I blurred it as much as I could... 12:36, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? And, Loudsplash, do you want me to make you a siggie? Don't tell me you love me... Then brake my heart...  22:40, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Should this be approved? ~Mooneh

Blur and smudge A LOT at the blue one's shading. 13:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred it as much as I can. 11:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Mooneh, If you don't mind, I blurred it for you: :) 23:26, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

The Blue One (Eagleheart?)'s tounge looks Neon...Try a lighter tone of pink... 02:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Other than that, I can say no more. 14:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, meh :| 12:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

 MUCH BETTER. Ghost glow BOO! 13:56, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There hasn't been a criticized comment since the 17th, should this be approved? 16:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 17:09, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Silversnow (Q+K)
Silversnow from Stupid Little Things Called Toms She is a beautiful white she-cat with silver markings. Her kits are Whitekit (dark blue white hind leg), Falconkit (brown tabby, blue eyes like his father), Willowkit (light gray green eyes), and Blossomkit (cream, ginger paws) Comments? Hazeleye 19:34, September 27, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Blur and smudge Silversnow's stripes. Change Whitekit's pelt a bit. It looks greenish to me. <font color=#545569>Try this color. The hex code is #545569. (Thanks, Cloudeh XD) 23:11, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I did blur and smudge Silversnow's markings. She isn't a tabby so they aren't stripes as much as they are swirls. And I'll change Whitekit's color.Hazeleye 14:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Reuploaded: Fixed it are you sure it isn't a little too blue? PS what do you think of the other kits? Hazeleye 14:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Make Silversnow's paw pink. Or pink grey. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  15:12, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Fixed it Leopardclaw! Thanks! Hazeleye 17:24, October 2, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye loves SilverXHawk

Blur and smudgesmudgesmudge all the markings (Whitekit's leg, Blossomkit's paws, Silversnow's tabby swirls,etc) >:) <span style="color:#3090C7; background:#3BB9FF; border:1px solid #3090C7; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #3090C7;"> The Tides of Change 07:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred and smudged everything. Better?Hazeleye 20:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)Hazeleye

Lookin' good, Hazel. <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 20:06, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 11:36, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 17:09, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wilowdawn (Q+K)
Willowdawn! I <3 her! Kits are (From the left to right) Wildkit, Squirrelkit and Dawnkit. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is adorable! Darken Willowdawn's nose a teensy bit. Lighten her pads a bit, too. 19:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  07:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Are Dawnkit's paws meant to look pinkish? It doesn't look very natural. Grace glow Believe 09:14, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  17:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelkit's stripes look a bit green. Willowdawn's pads should be an old rosey sort of colour. And Dawnkit's paws still look pink... Are they meant to be cream? <span style="color:#6D7B8D; background:#98AFC7; border:1px solid #6D7B8D; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #6D7B8D;"&gt; For two years the wind blows... 05:44, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The paws are my idea of cream, but I made em a little more brown white that pink white. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   16:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but the stripes look like marsh colour. Ghost glow BOO! 18:49, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cream is brownish white sometimes, and sometimes it's pinkish white. It depends on what you want it to be. I still think you should fix Squirrelkit's stripes.<span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 05:28, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded I changed Dawnkit's paws back to pink-cream, I prefer it like that. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…   1,000 Edits!   15:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? 11:36, October 21, 2011(UTC)

You can't CBA images when you're not leader or deputy, Nightfern. 21:12, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 17:09, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkstar


a picture of Hawkstar, the witty leader of fireclan.

Warmheart 10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, you've went over the 20 limit. This will probably be declined.

she's right. but this is good. i like it. but btw you have to have a plain white backgroud Kiba  The search for Paradise...  11:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Over the 20 limit. This will probably be declined......plus, the background is coloured. Grace glow Believe 12:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is excellent, but it will be declined, due to two reasons. One, you are over the twenty limit, meaning that there can only be twenty images for approval at once; two, you are not allowed a coloured background, so you should make it plain white. Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  18:15, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

i changed the background, but i dont think i can do anything about the 20 limit. Warmheart 03:49, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually this should be fine because there are I think 7 images that need archived and the leads are kinda inactive so I think it can stay up. I know i'm posting my 2 while I have teh chance. 13:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I see your poimt Splasheh. This can probably stay then. I can not find any crticisms at all. Well done! Leopard claw  Trick or Treat?  It's Halloween…  17:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but none of the images have been moved, have they?

This is amazing!! It's the 20th image, so it's okay. The two below however are over the limit. 00:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

i appreciate all the complements, and im glad its not over the 20 limit too. Warmheart 04:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Close call there. XD You've smudged this too much, though. Everything has a weird, blue outline. Make the dots above the eyes a little lighter. &lt;span style="color:#6D7B8D; background:#98AFC7; border:1px solid For two years the wind blows... 05:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

ok, i erased the blue arua, and lightened the dots but im not sure if i can fix the smudge problem. Warmheart 11:37, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok. It's just that it smudges into some of the lineart. This is amazing. No comments from me. :) <span style="color:#000000; background:#E56717; border:1px dashed #000000; -moz-border-radius: 1em; -webkit-border-radius: 1em; color: #000000;"> Gather 'round for a SpOoKy story! 18:14, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 12:00, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

You're not leader or deputy, are you Night? 21:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

She isn't, but she's declined (or threatened to decline) an image already.. Ghost glow  Watch  out,  there's  ghosts  about!  15:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. 17:09, October 28, 2011 (UTC)