Warriors Share Wiki talk:Create

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Join!
Hey Nightfern, I wanna join! Hollyheart The Den Of AquaClan 19:39, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

That's great, Hollyheart! We'll get started. I'll talk to you later! Nightfern 19:51, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I would like to join if that's alright with Nightfern? Hazel feather 02:26, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

That's perfect, Hazel Feather! I'll add you to the members list. Nightfern 12:07, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Story
'''What would you do to improve this story? Rate it from 0/10, please!'''

Nightfern's Story 13

Hey, Nightfern! ^ ^ I would like to join Project:Create. And as for your story, it's great, except it could use a couple of tiny improvements, here:


 * The use of the word "sable". "Sable brown ears" wouldn't make sense because "sable", according to the New Oxford American Dictionary, means "black". It's like saying "black brown ears" XD. A word such as "tawny" (meaning "orange or yellowish-brown"), "hazel", "beige", "mahogany", "fawn", "caramel", "chesnut", "cream", or "fallow" (meaning "light brown") would be better.

Otherwise, I love it! It has tons of action. I'd give it an 8/10! Midnitesky (Talk)
 * "Relieved" ("relived" in your story) is misspelled. Check the spelling of other words, too.

Ah, thanks! I fixed it XD Nightfern 20:32, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

I wanna join!!!
Nightfern, can I join? Please!!!! =3 ♥ Holly feather ™♥ 12:24, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Of course you can join! Nightfern 13:03, November 2, 2010 (UTC)