Talk:Lonely Sorrow/@comment-3440678-20120311104649

Nice, I like it. Just one thing, and it's a thing that gets on my nerves, when someone speaks and you put 'he said' after it, you don't capitalize the he. You only capitalize if you have something like 'He walked off' after it. Lemme show you, I think I explained really badly.

"I'll be watching you!" he hissed.

"I'll be watching you!" He stalked away.