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Sleep Well, My Angel ~ Leopardclaw and Cross-scar
I'd like someone other than Little, or Shadeh to do this, please =D 20:47, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leopard, you might want to sign. xD 20:35, June 1, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Yeah, well I had other things on my mind x3 20:47, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

The Way it is Series
Not finished, but I'm proud all the same. 8D 15:46, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Unless you want one of us to do this, I think Little and I should refrain from doing this one as well so that other users can have a chance. 20:32, June 1, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

That might be a good idea. 20:47, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. BTW, do you mean I should do a critque for the whole series? Rowan fall "You see?You see what comes of battle?" 15:08, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yup. 15:47, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Plot recives a 10 Beautiful plot! It gets all twisted an evil, just enough to keep the reader hanging on to every word, but no so much as to confuse. I see nothing to improve here.

Characters recives a 10  I could easily see the personality of each character. I knew Dawnstar was too brave to simply give up her clan, that Dusk wanted power but wasn't exactly the sharpest knife in the drawer, that Lithuim wasn't evila nd didn't want to follow the orders of the others but did so because she had to, and much more. Nothing to improve here, either.

Grammar recives a 9 Good grammar, i saw a few mistakes, but only, like, one for every other chapter. They are mostly misspellings, like you were simply typing too fast or hit the wrong keys :).

All-in-all, it recives a 9.5 This was a wonderful series, and I can't wait for you to continue it. At least, I hope it's not over, that'd just be cruel xDDD. I'll keep an eye on it to see when you update! Rowan fall "You see?You see what comes of battle?" 16:43, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Embark on Fate's Journey
I haven't put anything up for awhile so... yeah. I'll go spellcheck it now, so by the time someone sees this it will be done XDDD (It'll take me about two seconds to spellcheck it, anyway) Rowan fall "You see?You see what comes of battle?" 15:09, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. It may not be done for a couple days, though, because I've got finals this week. 20:22, June 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Sun
I'm done! Spellchecking done, typing done, now I just need it critiqued! Rowan fall "You see?You see what comes of battle?" 19:45, June 9, 2012 (UTC)